V a L E N

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My first crown has caused me pain. Went to the dentist today. He adjusted the crown. I'm still in pain! Hoping I don't have to have a root canal but whatever to make this pain go away. Not going out to dinner. We will just have to celebrate later! Much more to our story but that is all for now folks! Happy friends day, my Valentines at PS!

V A L E N sleepy v a l e n….snore the day cupid wore me out with pain and meds sleepy v a l e n..biz busy that is for my love this holiday’s not a bunch of chocolate or gifts…i don’t care ‘cause we’ve suffered through good and bad weathered the storm letting the fish off the hook my man i so love and besides we bought a car this one is just the oddball year of pain and cheer yes cheer because i’m loved Kim Rodrigues © 2017

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 2/15/2017 3:23:00 PM

Aw, poor lady, I hope you're feeling a bit better tomorrow. This was a cool poem, Kim. The true value you clearly see, still having someone pamper you ain't all bad either ... whether in health or pain. Nice write though. Love and hugs to you and yours.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/15/2017 7:23:00 PM