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booming overhead the geese fly low like bombers~ death drops on summer

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Karen Croft

Date: 4/28/2024 4:28:00 AM

Enjoyed reading!

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 10/3/2023 1:26:00 PM

great Haiku...liked the reference to 'bombers'. The last line was perfect. Enjoyed the read, Sara

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/4/2023 4:58:00 AM

Thank you Sara! When you startle the poop out of me you get a poem! ;D xomo

Jan Allison

Date: 9/15/2023 8:46:00 AM

oh Mo what a wonderful image you have in my head - the title is perfect! hugs Jan xx

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 9/17/2023 7:18:00 AM

Thank you Lovely! xomo

Ilene Bauer

Date: 9/14/2023 12:45:00 PM

wonderful, maureen!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 9/15/2023 6:19:00 AM

Thank you Ilene! They actually startled me the other day, spotting their dark creeping figures out my window lol xomo

Jeff Connelly

Date: 9/14/2023 10:33:00 AM

Ahhh yes, it's that time of the year Maureen. The Canadian air force at its finest. I just got back from a walk at a local park where the geese graze on the grass. You don't get shat on from above; but do have to tread on the green poop pellets lololol. Thanks for birding and wording. Hugs

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 9/15/2023 6:20:00 AM

LOL! the real Snow Birds… and our scariest wild things. xomo