Deborah Burch Poet Haiku

Utopia's Slippery Slope Continuum

Utopia's Slippery Slope Continuum 

        Trees of pink snow bloom
     by the lake when Spring is full
           Young warriors dream

                          ...

               Old warriors walk
   Through dreamless trees of concrete 
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3.8.2017©deborah burch

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Jannie Breedt April 18, 2017 at 2:39 PM Hi Deborah. Gee what a contrast in two haiku and how it washed my brain ha ha. I dig it. Wonderful. Many hugs Jannie

Kai Michael Neumann April 8, 2017 at 2:43 AM Deborah. Congratulations. This is very meaningful. Short, bittersweet and slippery. Kai

Teddy Kimathi April 7, 2017 at 8:49 AM Finely placed words..... Congrats Deborah, for your placement in the contest!! ;-)

Mark Martin April 5, 2017 at 8:40 AM Nice double-haiku Deborah! Congratulations! :-)

Kai Michael Neumann April 4, 2017 at 12:08 PM Congratulations Deborah and thanks for taking part. Your poem is so short and yet/thus (?) so awesome. Good stuff, Kai

Meenakshi Raina April 3, 2017 at 2:33 PM Congratulations on your win!

Janice Canerdy April 3, 2017 at 8:41 AM A powerful contrast here, Deborah. Congrats on your win! Give me the pink snow! Janice

Richard Lamoureux March 24, 2017 at 9:21 AM I like the contrast. Well done Deborah. Deborah Burch March 25, 2017 at 6:38 PM Thank you Richard!! Very much!! :)

Andrea Dietrich March 21, 2017 at 5:42 PM wow, what a clever wAY to do that challenge. I'm impressed! Deborah Burch March 21, 2017 at 6:25 PM Andy you have no idea how much your words mean to mean!! :) thank you my friend! Love you bunches!!

Matthew Anish March 21, 2017 at 4:56 PM Interesting haiku here! Peace & Love Matthew Anish Deborah Burch March 21, 2017 at 6:25 PM Thank you kindly Matthew!:)

Manoj Kumar March 21, 2017 at 1:55 AM Great work Deborah. Beautiful...... Keep writing Deborah Burch March 21, 2017 at 6:27 PM Thank you so much Manjo!! :) blessings to you my friend. Deb