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Utopia's Slippery Slope Continuum

Utopia's Slippery Slope Continuum Trees of pink snow bloom by the lake when Spring is full Young warriors dream ... Old warriors walk Through dreamless trees of concrete Modernization 3.8.2017©deborah burch

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Jannie Breedt
Date: 4/18/2017 2:39:00 PM
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Hi Deborah. Gee what a contrast in two haiku and how it washed my brain ha ha. I dig it. Wonderful. Many hugs Jannie
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 4/8/2017 2:43:00 AM
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Deborah. Congratulations. This is very meaningful. Short, bittersweet and slippery. Kai
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 4/7/2017 8:49:00 AM
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Finely placed words..... Congrats Deborah, for your placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Mark Martin
Date: 4/5/2017 8:40:00 AM
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Nice double-haiku Deborah! Congratulations! :-)
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 4/4/2017 12:08:00 PM
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Congratulations Deborah and thanks for taking part. Your poem is so short and yet/thus (?) so awesome. Good stuff, Kai
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Meenakshi Raina
Date: 4/3/2017 2:33:00 PM
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Congratulations on your win!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 4/3/2017 8:41:00 AM
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A powerful contrast here, Deborah. Congrats on your win! Give me the pink snow! Janice
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/24/2017 9:21:00 AM
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I like the contrast. Well done Deborah.
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Deborah Burch
Date: 3/25/2017 6:38:00 PM
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Thank you Richard!! Very much!! :)
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/21/2017 5:42:00 PM
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wow, what a clever wAY to do that challenge. I'm impressed!
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Deborah Burch
Date: 3/21/2017 6:25:00 PM
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Andy you have no idea how much your words mean to mean!! :) thank you my friend! Love you bunches!!
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Matthew Anish
Date: 3/21/2017 4:56:00 PM
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Interesting haiku here! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Deborah Burch
Date: 3/21/2017 6:25:00 PM
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Thank you kindly Matthew!:)
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Manoj Kumar
Date: 3/21/2017 1:55:00 AM
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Great work Deborah. Beautiful...... Keep writing
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Deborah Burch
Date: 3/21/2017 6:27:00 PM
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Thank you so much Manjo!! :) blessings to you my friend. Deb

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