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Utopia's Slippery Slope Continuum

Utopia's Slippery Slope Continuum 

        Trees of pink snow bloom
     by the lake when Spring is full
           Young warriors dream

                          ...

               Old warriors walk
   Through dreamless trees of concrete 
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3.8.2017©deborah burch

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Jannie Breedt Date: 4/18/2017 2:39:00 PM Hi Deborah. Gee what a contrast in two haiku and how it washed my brain ha ha. I dig it. Wonderful. Many hugs Jannie Login to Reply

Kai Michael Neumann Date: 4/8/2017 2:43:00 AM Deborah. Congratulations. This is very meaningful. Short, bittersweet and slippery. Kai Login to Reply

Teddy Kimathi Date: 4/7/2017 8:49:00 AM Finely placed words..... Congrats Deborah, for your placement in the contest!! ;-) Login to Reply

Mark Martin Date: 4/5/2017 8:40:00 AM Nice double-haiku Deborah! Congratulations! :-) Login to Reply

Kai Michael Neumann Date: 4/4/2017 12:08:00 PM Congratulations Deborah and thanks for taking part. Your poem is so short and yet/thus (?) so awesome. Good stuff, Kai Login to Reply

Meenakshi Raina Date: 4/3/2017 2:33:00 PM Congratulations on your win! Login to Reply

Janice Canerdy Date: 4/3/2017 8:41:00 AM A powerful contrast here, Deborah. Congrats on your win! Give me the pink snow! Janice Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 3/24/2017 9:21:00 AM I like the contrast. Well done Deborah. Login to Reply Deborah Burch Date: 3/25/2017 6:38:00 PM Thank you Richard!! Very much!! :)

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/21/2017 5:42:00 PM wow, what a clever wAY to do that challenge. I'm impressed! Login to Reply Deborah Burch Date: 3/21/2017 6:25:00 PM Andy you have no idea how much your words mean to mean!! :) thank you my friend! Love you bunches!!

Matthew Anish Date: 3/21/2017 4:56:00 PM Interesting haiku here! Peace & Love Matthew Anish Login to Reply Deborah Burch Date: 3/21/2017 6:25:00 PM Thank you kindly Matthew!:)

Manoj Kumar Date: 3/21/2017 1:55:00 AM Great work Deborah. Beautiful...... Keep writing Login to Reply Deborah Burch Date: 3/21/2017 6:27:00 PM Thank you so much Manjo!! :) blessings to you my friend. Deb