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Utopia In Soap Bubbles

The worlds of utopia are like soap bubbles, drifting in the air aimlessly and dreamily, as they sometimes bond with each other, becoming bigger. Reality is one nasty needle that bursts bubbles of utopia.....but sometimes the bubbles swallow the needle, imprisoning it in its own cause......

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Mark Martin

Date: 4/5/2017 10:14:00 AM

Nice imagery - especially with the needle! Congratulations Teddy! :-)

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 4/10/2017 5:53:00 AM

Greetings, Mark. Thank you so much for your warm applause, and enjoying my piece!!! ;-)

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 4/4/2017 12:03:00 PM

Hi Teddy. Thank you for taking part in my contest. Congratulations. The bubble swallowing the needle is a very convincing image. Kai

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 4/5/2017 8:46:00 AM

Hi Kai. You're welcome!! ;-) Thank you very much for enjoying and applauding my poem in your contest!!! ;-)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/4/2017 12:02:00 AM

Well done, congrats!

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 4/4/2017 6:05:00 AM

Thank you so much for your applause, Richard!! :-)

Agnes Krampe

Date: 4/3/2017 6:02:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Teddy. Great image, and love the ending.

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 4/4/2017 6:04:00 AM

Thank you so much Agnes, for your warm applause!! *^_^*

Janis Thompson

Date: 4/3/2017 3:59:00 PM

Great poetry Teddy. I love the ending. Congratulations on your win.

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 4/4/2017 6:01:00 AM

Thank you so much Janis, for reading, enjoying, and applauding my work!! *^_^*

Meenakshi Raina

Date: 4/3/2017 2:30:00 PM

Congratulations Teddy!! Your poem is beautiful ...I liked the last two lines...

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 4/4/2017 5:57:00 AM

Hi Meenakshi. Thank you so much for enjoying and applauding my work!! *^_^*

Janice Canerdy

Date: 4/3/2017 8:33:00 AM

Very thought-provoking, Teddy. Congrats on your win! Janice

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 4/4/2017 5:50:00 AM

Thank you very much, Janice, for your kind applause!! *^_^*

Funom Makama

Date: 3/5/2017 9:55:00 AM

You have pointed out the message so clear, poetic, original and with a fantastic imagery expression. Thank you for this lovely share friend. This is definitely a star content.

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 3/7/2017 4:22:00 AM

Welcome, Funom. I really appreciate your visit and morale support..... Thank you so much!!! ;-)