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Utopia In Soap Bubbles

The worlds of utopia are like soap bubbles,
         drifting in the air aimlessly and dreamily,
   as they sometimes bond with each other,
         becoming bigger.


       Reality is one nasty needle that bursts
   bubbles of utopia.....but sometimes
the bubbles swallow the needle,
    imprisoning it in its own cause......

Copyright © Teddy Kimathi | Year Posted 2017

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Mark Martin Date: 4/5/2017 10:14:00 AM Nice imagery - especially with the needle! Congratulations Teddy! :-) Login to Reply Teddy Kimathi Date: 4/10/2017 5:53:00 AM Greetings, Mark. Thank you so much for your warm applause, and enjoying my piece!!! ;-)

Kai Michael Neumann Date: 4/4/2017 12:03:00 PM Hi Teddy. Thank you for taking part in my contest. Congratulations. The bubble swallowing the needle is a very convincing image. Kai Login to Reply Teddy Kimathi Date: 4/5/2017 8:46:00 AM Hi Kai. You're welcome!! ;-) Thank you very much for enjoying and applauding my poem in your contest!!! ;-)

Richard Lamoureux Date: 4/4/2017 12:02:00 AM Well done, congrats! Login to Reply Teddy Kimathi Date: 4/4/2017 6:05:00 AM Thank you so much for your applause, Richard!! :-)

Agnes Krampe Date: 4/3/2017 6:02:00 PM Congrats on your win, Teddy. Great image, and love the ending. Login to Reply Teddy Kimathi Date: 4/4/2017 6:04:00 AM Thank you so much Agnes, for your warm applause!! *^_^*

Janis Medders Tobechi Date: 4/3/2017 3:59:00 PM Great poetry Teddy. I love the ending. Congratulations on your win. Login to Reply Teddy Kimathi Date: 4/4/2017 6:01:00 AM Thank you so much Janis, for reading, enjoying, and applauding my work!! *^_^*

Meenakshi Raina Date: 4/3/2017 2:30:00 PM Congratulations Teddy!! Your poem is beautiful ...I liked the last two lines... Login to Reply Teddy Kimathi Date: 4/4/2017 5:57:00 AM Hi Meenakshi. Thank you so much for enjoying and applauding my work!! *^_^*

Janice Canerdy Date: 4/3/2017 8:33:00 AM Very thought-provoking, Teddy. Congrats on your win! Janice Login to Reply Teddy Kimathi Date: 4/4/2017 5:50:00 AM Thank you very much, Janice, for your kind applause!! *^_^*

Funom Makama Date: 3/5/2017 9:55:00 AM You have pointed out the message so clear, poetic, original and with a fantastic imagery expression. Thank you for this lovely share friend. This is definitely a star content. Login to Reply Teddy Kimathi Date: 3/7/2017 4:22:00 AM Welcome, Funom. I really appreciate your visit and morale support..... Thank you so much!!! ;-)