Teddy Kimathi Poet Free verse

Utopia In Soap Bubbles

The worlds of utopia are like soap bubbles,
         drifting in the air aimlessly and dreamily,
   as they sometimes bond with each other,
         becoming bigger.


       Reality is one nasty needle that bursts
   bubbles of utopia.....but sometimes
the bubbles swallow the needle,
    imprisoning it in its own cause......

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Mark Martin April 5, 2017 at 10:14 AM Nice imagery - especially with the needle! Congratulations Teddy! :-) Teddy Kimathi April 10, 2017 at 5:53 AM Greetings, Mark. Thank you so much for your warm applause, and enjoying my piece!!! ;-)

Kai Michael Neumann April 4, 2017 at 12:03 PM Hi Teddy. Thank you for taking part in my contest. Congratulations. The bubble swallowing the needle is a very convincing image. Kai Teddy Kimathi April 5, 2017 at 8:46 AM Hi Kai. You're welcome!! ;-) Thank you very much for enjoying and applauding my poem in your contest!!! ;-)

Richard Lamoureux April 4, 2017 at 12:02 AM Well done, congrats! Teddy Kimathi April 4, 2017 at 6:05 AM Thank you so much for your applause, Richard!! :-)

Agnes Krampe April 3, 2017 at 6:02 PM Congrats on your win, Teddy. Great image, and love the ending. Teddy Kimathi April 4, 2017 at 6:04 AM Thank you so much Agnes, for your warm applause!! *^_^*

Janis Medders Tobechi April 3, 2017 at 3:59 PM Great poetry Teddy. I love the ending. Congratulations on your win. Teddy Kimathi April 4, 2017 at 6:01 AM Thank you so much Janis, for reading, enjoying, and applauding my work!! *^_^*

Meenakshi Raina April 3, 2017 at 2:30 PM Congratulations Teddy!! Your poem is beautiful ...I liked the last two lines... Teddy Kimathi April 4, 2017 at 5:57 AM Hi Meenakshi. Thank you so much for enjoying and applauding my work!! *^_^*

Janice Canerdy April 3, 2017 at 8:33 AM Very thought-provoking, Teddy. Congrats on your win! Janice Teddy Kimathi April 4, 2017 at 5:50 AM Thank you very much, Janice, for your kind applause!! *^_^*

Funom Makama March 5, 2017 at 9:55 AM You have pointed out the message so clear, poetic, original and with a fantastic imagery expression. Thank you for this lovely share friend. This is definitely a star content. Teddy Kimathi March 7, 2017 at 4:22 AM Welcome, Funom. I really appreciate your visit and morale support..... Thank you so much!!! ;-)