Utopia

The day is dark
The sun is cold
The faces are same
The feeling is numb
The sane is gone
What have we done... ? 

Follow me to the land which no one knows
Follow me to where the merits do not differ from the flaws
Follow me to where there is no need for a cause
The mind quits the persist, the conscience is no more exist
Liberty, salvation and peace obtained
Serenity painted all what have been gained
If this is a dream, i don't want to wake
If this is real i will live for your sake.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Agustin Avatar
June 26, 2024 at 2:28 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A   Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 3:41 PM
mohamed, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
A  Avatar
November 20, 2015 at 1:36 AM
Mohamed, a wonderful poem to read. SKAT
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace