Utopia

I see just like the existence of very bright daylight,
A community sharing, caring, rationally bright;
Unified under the shelter of love and brotherhood,
Freed of every contemptible wickedness and falsehood!

I see citizens, like angels, hover around happy,
None selfish, deceptive, dishonest, greedy and grabby;
Harmony, like the movement of very cosmos, rhythmic,
Facts, like mathematic logics, are so logarithmic...!

No quarrels; no fights; leave alone any war and battle,
Each one is happy and content - both humans and cattle;
No hunger; no thirst; poverty and illness have a place,
Oppressions and depressions seem replaced by divine grace...!

Governance, like a wave-less ocean, is calm and peaceful,
Freedom and justice flow like streams placid and delightful;
Animals, none wild, move and play amidst human beings,
Creatures, crawling and creeping rest, each one's moods agreeing!

Do you know, in such a nation, like Adam, I'm living?
To it, like a loyal subject, my mite I am giving;
I know, my hope, like that of Job's, never be put to test,
It's because I trust Utopia, my true place of rest...!


12 November 2021
''U'' Contest, New Poems Only Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Constance La France
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Koplin Avatar
November 20, 2021 at 8:07 AM
Congratulations on your win, excellent write!
La France Avatar
November 16, 2021 at 1:40 PM
Christuraj, wonderful poem, and I can see your writing improving more and more each day and congratulations on your Second Place win in my "U" Contest, New Poems ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Goldsmith Avatar
November 16, 2021 at 8:47 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Utopia" is a wonderful story/write. Love this one. Have a blessed day................
Jayasankar Avatar
November 15, 2021 at 11:58 PM
Nice description of Utopia... Chris...loved many lines..."facts, like mathematic logics, are so logarithmic..",..."oppressions and depressions seem replaced by divine grace"....beautiful...Congrats on your win...keep inspiring...~ Ani
Ray Choudhury Avatar
November 15, 2021 at 4:14 PM
Congratulations on your win. It's a wonderful place you have described - Utopia of our dreams! Your rhyming lines flow so gently and beautifully with a lyrical grace! BW ~ Mala
Alex Avatar
November 15, 2021 at 8:32 PM
Thank you very much.
Horne Avatar
November 14, 2021 at 6:56 AM
oh, this is lovely
Alex Avatar
November 15, 2021 at 7:20 AM
Thank you very much.
Daniel Avatar
November 12, 2021 at 10:25 PM
You have described the best utopia, Christuraj:) should be a winner:)
Alex Avatar
November 13, 2021 at 5:29 AM
Thank you.
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