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Utopia

I see just like the existence of very bright daylight, A community sharing, caring, rationally bright; Unified under the shelter of love and brotherhood, Freed of every contemptible wickedness and falsehood! I see citizens, like angels, hover around happy, None selfish, deceptive, dishonest, greedy and grabby; Harmony, like the movement of very cosmos, rhythmic, Facts, like mathematic logics, are so logarithmic...! No quarrels; no fights; leave alone any war and battle, Each one is happy and content - both humans and cattle; No hunger; no thirst; poverty and illness have a place, Oppressions and depressions seem replaced by divine grace...! Governance, like a wave-less ocean, is calm and peaceful, Freedom and justice flow like streams placid and delightful; Animals, none wild, move and play amidst human beings, Creatures, crawling and creeping rest, each one's moods agreeing! Do you know, in such a nation, like Adam, I'm living? To it, like a loyal subject, my mite I am giving; I know, my hope, like that of Job's, never be put to test, It's because I trust Utopia, my true place of rest...! 12 November 2021 ''U'' Contest, New Poems Only Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Date: 11/20/2021 8:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, excellent write!
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Date: 11/16/2021 1:40:00 PM
Christuraj, wonderful poem, and I can see your writing improving more and more each day and congratulations on your Second Place win in my "U" Contest, New Poems ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
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Date: 11/16/2021 8:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Utopia" is a wonderful story/write. Love this one. Have a blessed day................
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Date: 11/15/2021 11:58:00 PM
Nice description of Utopia... Chris...loved many lines..."facts, like mathematic logics, are so logarithmic..",..."oppressions and depressions seem replaced by divine grace"....beautiful...Congrats on your win...keep inspiring...~ Ani
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Date: 11/15/2021 4:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. It's a wonderful place you have described - Utopia of our dreams! Your rhyming lines flow so gently and beautifully with a lyrical grace! BW ~ Mala
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 11/15/2021 8:32:00 PM
Thank you very much.
Date: 11/14/2021 6:56:00 AM
oh, this is lovely
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 11/15/2021 7:20:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 11/12/2021 10:25:00 PM
You have described the best utopia, Christuraj:) should be a winner:)
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 11/13/2021 5:29:00 AM
Thank you.

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