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...dedicated to all my Soup brothers and sisters A lady at a window writing, measuring her words with strict precision. She takes a sip of tea as if to fuel her imagination. Memories go drifting by - a brother playing basketball, the softness of a springtime rain, the anger of an autumn sky, a flash, and thunder rumbling. Smells and sounds, grist to her mill. Nothing spoils her view until her best attempt is done. Still dissatisfied she tweaks and fiddles, substitutes a weak word for a stronger one. At last content she sets aside her pen. Yes, they will know her now, know the beauty of her mind, and know that she will always do her utmost.

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Date: 2/23/2016 3:53:00 PM
I think many can relate to this one Keith - I will continue to refine a poem a word here, a tweak there until I am happy... and yes I do drink tea whilst I write lol :-) hugs Jan xx
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 2/23/2016 4:21:00 PM
Thanks for a delightful review Jan! much appreciated... Keith

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