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A lady at a window writing,
measuring her words with strict precision.
She takes a sip of tea
as if to fuel her imagination.
Memories go drifting by - a brother
playing basketball, the softness
of a springtime rain, the anger
of an autumn sky, a flash, 
and thunder rumbling.
Smells and sounds, grist
to her mill. Nothing spoils
her view until her best attempt is done.
Still dissatisfied she tweaks
and fiddles, substitutes a weak word
for a stronger one. At last content
she sets aside her pen.
Yes, they will know her now,
know the beauty of her mind,
and know that she will always do her utmost.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Allison Avatar
February 23, 2016 at 3:53 PM
I think many can relate to this one Keith - I will continue to refine a poem a word here, a tweak there until I am happy... and yes I do drink tea whilst I write lol :-) hugs Jan xx
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February 23, 2016 at 4:21 PM
Thanks for a delightful review Jan! much appreciated... Keith
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