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Have you ever felt like Alice in the Looking Glass?
It may be easily done by a memory you have passed.

Instead of a white rabbit down the hole,
It was a red balloon I was chasing, like a mole.

Someone of Royalty yelling at me "Don't be so pert"!
While we are sitting at a table, just eating dessert.

     Then, with a plane ticket and a favorite flower in hand,
     Roaring skyward in that balloon so grand.

     Dancing onward into a pitch black room,
     With its secret box going "Boom...Boom...Boom".

     Ever more restless listening to that knell,
     Flying over the trees of a green, green dell.

Was it Winter or Spring...I did not know,
Until the flowers came bursting through the snow.

Turning to the open window so I could see,
It was just my face in the Looking Glass staring back at me.

The smell of lilacs wafted up in the smoke,
Realizing it was only a dream...as I awoke.

written:  1/2/16

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 1/12/2016 8:13:00 AM
Dan, congratulations for winning in the combination of 3 words contest! You deserve the win! :) -hans
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Dan Cwiak
Date: 1/13/2016 7:11:00 PM
Thanks, Hans. I appreciate your stopping to read and your comments very much.
Date: 1/10/2016 11:13:00 PM
Dan Congratulations on your win. Always ~LINDA~ . ;
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Date: 1/13/2016 7:10:00 PM
Thanks, Linda. Your comments are always appreciated with much humility, as your writings are so much better. (Hugs)
Date: 1/7/2016 2:09:00 PM
WOW - I see this placed - must have been the '3 word contest.' You succeeded in the "Alice" feel and it was a delight to read, the rhyme flowed all with ease, nothing forced - I thoroughly enjoyed it. If I haven't yet, I wish you a year where perfect healthy, joy and prosperity flow and grow through and around you. Come see my writes sometime, I've missed you ... CayCay
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Date: 1/7/2016 3:09:00 PM
Thanks, CayCay. I will try to get to your writes, but I have a lot going on right now. Unfortunately, it has left me little time to read anything, including the stuff I need to read. I do have the feeling that the my next "Musical" number will be coming soon. I hope it will be up to your standards...and thanks again, for your comments.
Date: 1/6/2016 3:13:00 PM
I LIKE THE RHYTHM, FLOW, AND RHYME IN THIS WINNER..CONGRATS!!!! SARA
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Date: 1/7/2016 2:10:00 AM
Thank you Sara. I am glad you stopped to read it and am very appreciative of your comments.
Date: 1/6/2016 7:29:00 AM
Greetings Dan. Congrats for your #1 placement in the contest! ;-)
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Date: 1/6/2016 2:51:00 PM
Thanks, Teddy. I appreciate your stopping to read and your comments. Have a Happy New Year!
Date: 1/5/2016 1:56:00 PM
Like the couplet and the flow of the words, Dan, what a dream. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 1/5/2016 3:05:00 PM
Thanks, Eve. I seem to have a better handle on the couplet form, so it was not difficult to write. However, my difficulty was in the choice. Since I could not decide which group to choose, I just had to include them all. That made it all the easier to come up with the words. I appreciate your comments, as always.
Date: 1/4/2016 10:16:00 AM
Dan, CONGRATS on your "Combination of Three Words WIN!" *SKAT*
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Date: 1/4/2016 11:57:00 AM
Happy New Year SKAT. Thanks for the comments and your stopping to read.
Date: 1/3/2016 4:15:00 PM
And ANOTHER win! I'm so happy for you and proud of you. Oh yea, it's gonna be a great year! Also, this write is very creative and Alice In Wonderlandish - I like it very much. I'll be back to visit your page soon, probably on the morrow ... CayCay
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Date: 1/3/2016 7:11:00 PM
Thanks, CayCay. I hope you had a wonderful holiday season and like you, I too am looking forward to a great year of writing. The challenges are all ahead, but when I know that I have your poetry works to read, they are not insurmountable. Thanks, again for your kind words of encouragement!
Date: 1/3/2016 3:47:00 PM
Enjoyed your couplet, Dan. Very imaginative.
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Date: 1/3/2016 6:58:00 PM
Thanks, David. Your stopping and comments are most appreciated.
Date: 1/3/2016 11:19:00 AM
Congratulations and Happy New Year!
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Date: 1/3/2016 3:20:00 PM
Thank you, Pashang. I appreciate your read and comments. Happy New Year to you!
Date: 1/3/2016 10:28:00 AM
Dan, this was very very clever of you! I love the fact you used ALL three combo's..Thank you for being a part of my contest! -luloo *congrats*
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Date: 1/3/2016 3:18:00 PM
Thank you, Laura. As I mentioned to Jack below, I couldn't decide which group to use, so I came back to it several times with the only decision I could make...use them all. I appreciate your comments very much. Kudos on the contest for making us think!
Date: 1/2/2016 3:09:00 PM
very imaginative write indeed
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Date: 1/2/2016 10:05:00 PM
Thanks, Jack. I appreciate your comment and only hope that it will be seen in that light. I didn't know which group to choose, so I decided to use them all as my poor talents would allow. Thanks, again.
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