Us and Our Planet

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US AND OUR PLANET

FROM MY ROOFTOP GARDEN, 01 NOVEMBER 2016, MY PICTURE, (c)

Creation

         Maturation
 
           Adaptation

              Proliferation 

                      Evolution

                   Industrialization

                              Automation 

                                    Production

                                           Pollution 

                                            Suffocation 

                                                Destruction 

                                                    Obliteration 
                             
                                                      Extinction of Man? 

                                                          Planet's salvation!





© Demetrios Trifiatis 
    01 November 2016

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Probir Gupta

Date: 11/2/2016 1:13:00 AM

Comfortable solution ! ... towards total oblivion ! ... through a nice free verse creation ....

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/2/2016 3:08:00 AM

It is the unavoidable solution my friend, Probir, if we do not change our ways! Thank you my friend. I hope you are alright!

Terry O'Leary

Date: 11/1/2016 7:19:00 PM

We are intelligent enough to destroy it... unfortunately, not intelligent enough to save it... perhaps we are simply preparing for the next step in evolution... Good write!! Terry

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/2/2016 3:11:00 AM

Thank you for your delightful visit and comment dear, Terry! Some of us have enough intelligence to save the planet but the many do not have the love required to save it for they put their ego above creation! Thank you so very much my friend!

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 11/1/2016 5:36:00 PM

That is what makes you you. Thanks for the wise post........A.M.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/1/2016 6:21:00 PM

Thank you my good friend, A.M. for your kind words!