Demetrios Trifiatis Poet Free verse

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US AND OUR PLANET

FROM MY ROOFTOP GARDEN, 01 NOVEMBER 2016, MY PICTURE, (c) 

Us and Our Planet

Creation

         Maturation
 
           Adaptation

              Proliferation 

                      Evolution

                   Industrialization

                              Automation 

                                    Production

                                           Pollution 

                                            Suffocation 

                                                Destruction 

                                                    Obliteration 
                             
                                                      Extinction of Man? 

                                                          Planet's salvation!





© Demetrios Trifiatis 
    01 November 2016

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Probir Gupta November 2, 2016 at 1:13 AM Comfortable solution ! ... towards total oblivion ! ... through a nice free verse creation .... Demetrios Trifiatis November 2, 2016 at 3:08 AM It is the unavoidable solution my friend, Probir, if we do not change our ways! Thank you my friend. I hope you are alright!

Terry O'Leary November 1, 2016 at 7:19 PM We are intelligent enough to destroy it... unfortunately, not intelligent enough to save it... perhaps we are simply preparing for the next step in evolution... Good write!! Terry Demetrios Trifiatis November 2, 2016 at 3:11 AM Thank you for your delightful visit and comment dear, Terry! Some of us have enough intelligence to save the planet but the many do not have the love required to save it for they put their ego above creation! Thank you so very much my friend!

Afolabi Muideen November 1, 2016 at 5:36 PM That is what makes you you. Thanks for the wise post........A.M. Demetrios Trifiatis November 1, 2016 at 6:21 PM Thank you my good friend, A.M. for your kind words!

Anne-Lise Andresen November 1, 2016 at 8:53 AM - Thanks for this my friend ... words that we all should think about - A 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Demetrios Trifiatis November 1, 2016 at 6:24 PM Yes, dear Anne-Lise we all have to think these words and do the best we can to save our planet! Thank you. Hugs!

Jan Allison November 1, 2016 at 4:27 AM My admiration at your wise words Demetrios:-)hugs Jan xx Demetrios Trifiatis November 1, 2016 at 6:26 PM What an honoring comment from your part dear, Jan. Thank you so very much!