Us

All we never know
We are our own punishers
We punish ourselves without knowing it
and we most of times accuse others n God

When we can't forgive others and ourselves
We get sick
When we can't Forget 
We get the anger and sadness
And they harm ourselves
When we can't understand each other 
We create the misunderstandings and they create rumors between us
When we can't feel the other's pain
We harm them
When we can't control our anger
We harm friends, neighbors, family even us
And we sometimes miss those we love and we like
When we judge others for this or that
We  are judging us on our own
When we feel happy that someone is loosing
We are the only one that are loosing much
When we have jealous
We kill our inside

Think about of the tears we've shade 
Just for those we regret, look well and ask yourself
Who is behind this?
Satan maybe as all say so?
The really evil is Us! 

If we can try to understand and realize what we are about to do
Maybe we can not harm ourselves

We create war
But we fight with ourselves
And those who bleed and die are Us!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 2/13/2017 12:18:00 AM
Your words are so sad and yet so true. A powerful write, well done. #7
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Date: 2/13/2017 2:26:00 AM
Thank you Elizabeth
Date: 2/12/2017 12:15:00 PM
Jill, thank you for the comment and the compliment, really, the humans are becoming something else.
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Date: 2/12/2017 8:23:00 AM
Alice, true that! You nailed this piece...yes the world is about 6 billion humans who have no empathy. I commend you on your passion and expression :)...Peace, Jill
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