James Fraser Poet Limerick

Us

Where once a neanderthal man stood
And evolution did what it could
        If it could turn back the time
        In it's evolutionary climb
Honestly, have we turned out for the good







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Sharon Ruebel November 22, 2010 at 2:45 PM Hello James, I would like to think that we have. Still, I guess a lot to learn. Well done As Always, Shar

Wilma Neels October 14, 2010 at 12:36 PM Good question James! Great limerick, once again proof of your gsoh ;)

Jayne Eggins October 11, 2010 at 9:27 PM Thought provoking read James ... thoroughly enjoyed the read ... thanks for your support and the comment on my poem much appreciated love Jayne x

Sara Kendrick October 11, 2010 at 3:54 PM Good question...Well, at least I am not being dragged around by my hair and clubbed if I don't do what the man wants..Sara

Sylvia Coulstock October 11, 2010 at 3:19 PM Hi James-I agree,it's debatable.I liked your limerick.Now neanderthals past and present can,t do this.And the evidence of all the poets in Soup prove evolution is still taking place in the human soul. luv June.

October 10, 2010 at 7:05 PM Very nice Limerick. I enjoyed reading tonight. Love Scarlett

Dr.Ram Mehta October 10, 2010 at 4:56 PM A nice query you have put in the last line, james

Doris Culverhouse October 10, 2010 at 4:46 PM enjoyed my friend!

Carolyn Devonshire October 10, 2010 at 4:23 PM I know some guys who are still "neanderthals," but have some good qualities that more "civilized" people lack. Enjoyed your limerick, James. Love, Carolyn

Michael J. Falotico October 10, 2010 at 2:52 PM Nice write my friend...enjoyed as usual....