Us

You and me together
Nothin' can stop us
Imagining our future
Two peas in a pod
Our minds are one
Livin' life
The way it's supposed to be lived
Not carin' 'bout the world
And its cliques
Just the two of us 
Knowin' nothin' can go wrong
In our own little world
Us
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Iloduba Jnr Avatar
September 2, 2009 at 3:33 PM
US INDEED! nice one.
Moreno Avatar
August 31, 2009 at 10:22 PM
I agree with Abe's comment, nice work.
Fraser Avatar
August 31, 2009 at 12:14 PM
Delightful write to friendship Savannah>>James
Poe Avatar
August 27, 2009 at 1:21 PM
Glad to hear that there are people who stand by our side thank you for sharing -Alley
Lopez Avatar
August 26, 2009 at 8:41 PM
Keep up the good work an asprire to reach the top!
Brown Avatar
August 26, 2009 at 2:44 PM
Thank you for sharing your poetry today Savannah. Love, Carol
Kendrick Avatar
August 26, 2009 at 2:32 PM
The last two lines are interesting. Keep writing. Sara
Chircop Avatar
August 26, 2009 at 12:56 PM
excellent write--charma
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