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You and me together Nothin' can stop us Imagining our future Two peas in a pod Our minds are one Livin' life The way it's supposed to be lived Not carin' 'bout the world And its cliques Just the two of us Knowin' nothin' can go wrong In our own little world Us

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Date: 9/2/2009 3:33:00 PM
US INDEED! nice one.
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Date: 8/31/2009 10:22:00 PM
I agree with Abe's comment, nice work.
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Date: 8/31/2009 12:14:00 PM
Delightful write to friendship Savannah>>James
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Date: 8/27/2009 1:21:00 PM
Glad to hear that there are people who stand by our side thank you for sharing -Alley
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Date: 8/26/2009 8:41:00 PM
Keep up the good work an asprire to reach the top!
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Date: 8/26/2009 2:44:00 PM
Thank you for sharing your poetry today Savannah. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/26/2009 2:32:00 PM
The last two lines are interesting. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 8/26/2009 12:56:00 PM
excellent write--charma
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