Us!!!!!!

When I think of US,
I can't help myself sometimes,
I get CAUGHT,
and caught up!!
Captivated by the means and ways,
we do the things that we do!!
 US
who tend to elevate the entire human race,
that much closer to the creator and all of his greatness!!!!!!
Sometimes I think of us and I get STUCK!!!
AWWWWWEEE STTTRRUCK!!!!
Surprised and mesmerized, by the way we live our lives.
Fore we are the kings and queens of creativity,
innovation and improvisation.
Taking a whole lot of nothin'
 and turning it into somethin'
PHENOMENAL!!!!!!

That's us.

Often times,
I think of US and I get
CHOKED!!!
and   choked up!!
As i come to realize
 the journies taken,
 the pathways lied,
The sacrafices
our ancestors made .
To insure us in this day,time and age,
that the whole world take note,
and be amazed,

SIMPLY BY US!!!!!!
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Kendrick Avatar
December 9, 2009 at 2:28 PM
Interesting topic that you have chosen on which to write this piece. God was good to allow us to be here at this time and this place. Keep the pen flowing. Sara
Freeman Avatar
December 4, 2009 at 7:42 PM
We're creative, our Father's instinct. Sincerely, Moses
Fisher Avatar
December 3, 2009 at 12:30 PM
Many congrats on your piece being featured this week. Rgds Janette
Brown Avatar
December 1, 2009 at 4:25 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poem being featured this week Jesu. May you have many more. Love, Carol
Treacy Avatar
November 30, 2009 at 1:39 PM
This is what makes poetry worth both reading and writing...Awesome read!! Well done!
Fraser Avatar
November 30, 2009 at 11:35 AM
Many congratulations on your poem being featured >> James
Freeman Avatar
November 30, 2009 at 9:07 AM
Awesome poem, Jesu. Congratulation, on your feature this week. Sincerely, Moses
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November 30, 2009 at 5:43 AM
Excellente write. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. A. W. www.freewebs.com/abcedit
Rider Avatar
July 10, 2009 at 8:19 PM
The sacrifice of the ancestors, to insure the safety of future generations, it is a life long battle for each generation to make the world a little bit better for the next one to come. wonnderful poem Jesu ~Trudy~
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