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sparks stray to my soul music-smile till passions cry what if boredom's creep stalks us? life stages dangled lively talk tings like wind chimes restored canvas tinted love written July 16/21 For Brian Strand Your Pick Contest

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/9/2021 11:49:00 AM

"Lively talk tings like wind chimes" just one of several images mirroring the vitality of this poem Brian. Congratulations on your win!

Brian Sambourne
Date: 8/9/2021 1:03:00 PM

Greetings Sam, Thank you for your kind comment. This piece was entered in a modified Haiku contest with an altered syllable count but it received an NA till Brian gave it a placement nod. Be well. Thanks again. Brian

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/18/2021 10:57:00 AM

And even though times of routine or even boredom, nevertheless the loves of our lives nearby! God bless!

Brian Sambourne
Date: 7/18/2021 12:59:00 PM

Hello Kim, Kind of you to drop by + leave an affirmative comment. Be well. Brian

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/17/2021 3:40:00 AM

This is vigorous and thought-provoking Brian.

Brian Sambourne
Date: 7/18/2021 1:03:00 PM

Greetings Caren, Your thoughtful note brightens my day. Best wishes, Brian