Us

sparks stray to my soul
music-smile till passions cry
what if boredom's creep stalks us?

life stages dangled
lively talk tings like wind chimes
restored canvas tinted love











 written July 16/21
For Brian Strand 
Your Pick Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 8/9/2021 11:49:00 AM
"Lively talk tings like wind chimes" just one of several images mirroring the vitality of this poem Brian. Congratulations on your win!
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 8/9/2021 1:03:00 PM
Greetings Sam, Thank you for your kind comment. This piece was entered in a modified Haiku contest with an altered syllable count but it received an NA till Brian gave it a placement nod. Be well. Thanks again. Brian
Date: 7/18/2021 10:57:00 AM
And even though times of routine or even boredom, nevertheless the loves of our lives nearby! God bless!
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 7/18/2021 12:59:00 PM
Hello Kim, Kind of you to drop by + leave an affirmative comment. Be well. Brian
Date: 7/17/2021 3:40:00 AM
This is vigorous and thought-provoking Brian.
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 7/18/2021 1:03:00 PM
Greetings Caren, Your thoughtful note brightens my day. Best wishes, Brian
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