Brian Sambourne Poet Free verse

Us

sparks stray to my soul
music-smile till passions cry
what if boredom's creep stalks us?

life stages dangled
lively talk tings like wind chimes
restored canvas tinted love











 written July 16/21
For Brian Strand 
Your Pick Contest

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Sam Kauffman August 9, 2021 at 11:49 AM "Lively talk tings like wind chimes" just one of several images mirroring the vitality of this poem Brian. Congratulations on your win! Brian Sambourne August 9, 2021 at 1:03 PM Greetings Sam, Thank you for your kind comment. This piece was entered in a modified Haiku contest with an altered syllable count but it received an NA till Brian gave it a placement nod. Be well. Thanks again. Brian

Kim Rodrigues July 18, 2021 at 10:57 AM And even though times of routine or even boredom, nevertheless the loves of our lives nearby! God bless! Brian Sambourne July 18, 2021 at 12:59 PM Hello Kim, Kind of you to drop by + leave an affirmative comment. Be well. Brian

Caren Krutsinger July 17, 2021 at 3:40 AM This is vigorous and thought-provoking Brian. Brian Sambourne July 18, 2021 at 1:03 PM Greetings Caren, Your thoughtful note brightens my day. Best wishes, Brian