M. L. Kiser Poet Rictameter

Ursids

Ursids
radiant lights
December meteors
in their ecstatic nighttime flight;
a waning moon will not halt their travel
comet Tuttle left them behind
their annual flight’s bright;
Ursa Minor’s
Ursids.


12-8-19
A Red-Letter Day Rictameter Poetry Contest
William Kekaula

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Connie Marcum Wong December 31, 2019 at 9:42 PM I love this M.L. Congratulations on your wonderful podium win! Hau'oli Makahiki Hou! This is a fave for me! xxoo M. L. Kiser January 2, 2020 at 7:06 PM Thanks so much and Happy New Year!

Jan Allison December 28, 2019 at 10:32 AM I adored this one ML I would have written about the night sky too had I thought of it lol:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx M. L. Kiser December 28, 2019 at 7:06 PM Thanks so much.

William Kelii Kekaula December 28, 2019 at 10:03 AM The imagery is righteously vivid and mesmerizing to envision, my compliments on your win and my heartfelt thanks for entertaining my contest ~ Aloha always William M. L. Kiser December 28, 2019 at 7:05 PM Thanks for the placement in your contest.

Caren Krutsinger December 9, 2019 at 12:02 PM Your cosmic knowledge makes this one upbeat and personal. M. L. Kiser December 10, 2019 at 2:31 PM Ooh, thanks so much.

Lin Lane December 9, 2019 at 7:20 AM Very well written, M.L. Anything that showcases the moon and other celestial bodies wins me over. Well wishes for a contest win. M. L. Kiser December 9, 2019 at 8:16 AM I'm glad you enjoyed it, thanks for dropping by.