Ursids

Ursids radiant lights December meteors in their ecstatic nighttime flight; a waning moon will not halt their travel comet Tuttle left them behind their annual flight’s bright; Ursa Minor’s Ursids. 12-8-19 A Red-Letter Day Rictameter Poetry Contest William Kekaula

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 12/31/2019 9:42:00 PM

I love this M.L. Congratulations on your wonderful podium win! Hau'oli Makahiki Hou! This is a fave for me! xxoo

M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/2/2020 7:06:00 PM

Thanks so much and Happy New Year!

Jan Allison

Date: 12/28/2019 10:32:00 AM

I adored this one ML I would have written about the night sky too had I thought of it lol:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

M. L. Kiser
Date: 12/28/2019 7:06:00 PM

Thanks so much.

Hilo Poet

Date: 12/28/2019 10:03:00 AM

The imagery is righteously vivid and mesmerizing to envision, my compliments on your win and my heartfelt thanks for entertaining my contest ~ Aloha always William

M. L. Kiser
Date: 12/28/2019 7:05:00 PM

Thanks for the placement in your contest.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/9/2019 12:02:00 PM

Your cosmic knowledge makes this one upbeat and personal.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 12/10/2019 2:31:00 PM

Ooh, thanks so much.

Lin Lane

Date: 12/9/2019 7:20:00 AM

Very well written, M.L. Anything that showcases the moon and other celestial bodies wins me over. Well wishes for a contest win.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 12/9/2019 8:16:00 AM

I'm glad you enjoyed it, thanks for dropping by.