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poem submitted to "1445 Up to You Again" poetry contest, Brian Strand sponsor, February 20, 2026.

poem originally written for "Urbanity" poetry contest sponsored by Ultramarine Literary Review

URBANITY-Concrete Blossoms

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Neon vines entwine~ steel branches scrape the smog sky. A taxi's harsh bloom paints the pavement yellow, then fades like a dying firefly.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Gauthier Avatar
March 25, 2026 at 1:56 PM
delightful ~
Hind Avatar
February 24, 2026 at 10:43 PM
Love this!! great imagery <3
Williams Avatar
February 24, 2026 at 5:57 PM
Very nicely done, Sara! You capture a number of scenes we often take for granted in an urban landscape. Thank you for sharing this, and congratulations on your strong showing in the contest! Blessings & very best! Bartholomew
Rodrigues Avatar
February 21, 2026 at 3:57 AM
Imagery great in final two lines.
Nicole Avatar
February 20, 2026 at 5:21 PM
' steel branches scrape the smog sky. ' An image that doesn't whisper soft moments. There's something about being in the country, just lingering in nature that brings a gentle calm. You've written this so beautifully, Sara. Hugs, Brandy
Dietrich Avatar
February 20, 2026 at 1:32 PM
Very cool imagery!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
February 20, 2026 at 5:14 PM
thank you for visiting and for your encouragement
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