Urban Sonnet

Surrounded by two rapid running shores
a concrete chain of buildings fill the skies
strong pungent scents compete with rapid scores
of pulsing sounds and screeching, crowded cries
iconoclastic beats and muted sighs
the City always wakens sleepy eyes. 

We hail a taxi from a dirty curb
while subways rumble, sweating underground 
and ride the hustle through the shifting herd
torrential rains quite suddenly come down 
they slap and streak the windows all around
as raindrops distort faces that surround. 

A plethora of sights spread like a feast 
from Broadway shows to High Line paths that span
Hudson River’s architectural peaks
roof top restaurants, a classy jazz band
we disappear into museum land
then fall asleep, a true, devoted fan.

To venture into life’s mosaic streams
is to taste and embrace all that it means.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Evans Avatar
August 2, 2020 at 5:05 PM
How I love to "disappear into museum land". Cool poem. Thanks for sharing..................peace!
Inman Avatar
July 13, 2020 at 10:52 PM
Very imaginative write Laura. I love the line "we disappear into museum land".
Leiser Avatar
July 13, 2020 at 10:58 PM
Thanks for commenting on this piece from awhile ago, James...the city is more dangerous nowadays, unfortunately..
Chiri Avatar
May 28, 2019 at 7:26 AM
What a lovely urban sonnet Laura! I enjoyed the read very much!
Leiser Avatar
May 28, 2019 at 8:31 AM
Thank you, Brenda! :)
One Avatar
May 27, 2019 at 6:36 AM
This sounds really urban! It flows really well and has vivid imagery, created from your pen..
Leiser Avatar
May 27, 2019 at 9:54 AM
Thank you, Silent! Glad you enjoyed this one! :)
Ashley Avatar
May 22, 2019 at 7:39 PM
Oh, simply superb, Laura! You've captured the cacophony and the daily grind of the hustle and bustle along with the lifestyle and beauty of big city culture in your exceptional sonnet. I just love your closing couplet for a grand finale. Best wishes for a win and my warmest wishes to you, my friend.. ~Susan
Leiser Avatar
May 26, 2019 at 8:35 AM
Thanks so much for your kind comments, Susan. So happy you liked this! :)
Awtry Avatar
May 22, 2019 at 8:08 AM
I like how you wrote an urban sonnet...about the city...Clever idea...and then you wrote it so well! Best of luck in Emile's contest! This reads like a winner!
Leiser Avatar
May 26, 2019 at 8:36 AM
Thanks, P.S. for commenting on my poem! I truly appreciate it! :)
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