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Urban Sonnet

Surrounded by two rapid running shores a concrete chain of buildings fill the skies strong pungent scents compete with rapid scores of pulsing sounds and screeching, crowded cries iconoclastic beats and muted sighs the City always wakens sleepy eyes. We hail a taxi from a dirty curb while subways rumble, sweating underground and ride the hustle through the shifting herd torrential rains quite suddenly come down they slap and streak the windows all around as raindrops distort faces that surround. A plethora of sights spread like a feast from Broadway shows to High Line paths that span Hudson River’s architectural peaks roof top restaurants, a classy jazz band we disappear into museum land then sink to sleep, a true, devoted fan. To venture into life’s mosaic streams is to taste and embrace all that it means. Written on 5/21/2019

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Date: 8/2/2020 5:05:00 PM
How I love to "disappear into museum land". Cool poem. Thanks for sharing..................peace!
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Date: 7/13/2020 10:52:00 PM
Very imaginative write Laura. I love the line "we disappear into museum land".
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Laura Leiser
Date: 7/13/2020 10:58:00 PM
Thanks for commenting on this piece from awhile ago, James...the city is more dangerous nowadays, unfortunately..
Date: 5/28/2019 7:26:00 AM
What a lovely urban sonnet Laura! I enjoyed the read very much!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 5/28/2019 8:31:00 AM
Thank you, Brenda! :)
Date: 5/27/2019 6:36:00 AM
This sounds really urban! It flows really well and has vivid imagery, created from your pen..
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Laura Leiser
Date: 5/27/2019 9:54:00 AM
Thank you, Silent! Glad you enjoyed this one! :)
Date: 5/22/2019 7:39:00 PM
Oh, simply superb, Laura! You've captured the cacophony and the daily grind of the hustle and bustle along with the lifestyle and beauty of big city culture in your exceptional sonnet. I just love your closing couplet for a grand finale. Best wishes for a win and my warmest wishes to you, my friend.. ~Susan
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Laura Leiser
Date: 5/26/2019 8:35:00 AM
Thanks so much for your kind comments, Susan. So happy you liked this! :)
Date: 5/22/2019 8:08:00 AM
I like how you wrote an urban sonnet...about the city...Clever idea...and then you wrote it so well! Best of luck in Emile's contest! This reads like a winner!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 5/26/2019 8:36:00 AM
Thanks, P.S. for commenting on my poem! I truly appreciate it! :)

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