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Traffic on avenue, CROWDS flock to subway station, yellow cabs hustling.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Date: 5/21/2010 9:22:00 AM
Congrats in the strictly haiku contest. LIked the hustle bustle feel to this one. LUv, andrea
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Date: 5/18/2010 8:22:00 PM
Enjoyed this one the first time I read it. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Charles's contest. Another honor for your to enjoy. Keep on writing. Karen
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Date: 5/18/2010 12:48:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Charles's "Strict Haiku" contest Andrew. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/18/2010 11:00:00 AM
congrad's dear friend...we're a pair of HM's LOL
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Date: 5/18/2010 8:06:00 AM
Congrats Andrew on yur HM in the Strictly Haiku contest with this wonderful depiction of city life .. enjoy another special honor ..luv.. from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 5/18/2010 12:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your awesome HM in my contest!!!!--------Charles
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Date: 5/15/2010 7:39:00 PM
Awesome images of city life. Are you a New Yorker? This scene sounds like the Big Apple. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/14/2010 4:04:00 PM
You paint a picture with words in this one. I really like the last line. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Karen
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Date: 5/14/2010 10:15:00 AM
well done, enjoyed your haiku,..p.d.
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