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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ The subway whirs~ a thousand hands press close in warmth, not fear. Streetlights blink like fireflies trapped in chrome. Laughter climbs brick walls, a thousand lives buzz, entwined~ The city breathes. We're not alone. poem submitted to Ultramarine Review Literary Magazine for its contest on the topic of urbanity.
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