Ronald Kent Poet Rhyme

Urban Island

Beware there man when out for your drink
Your wondering eye the one that don't think
Basking in glory man of the hour
Spotting one there pretty hair with a flower

Spending your pay wife at home wait
She seems to like you in your drunker-ed state
Unaware you're half in the bag
You've gained the attention Bell Island Hag

Now there is a legend this Hag be pretty
That seek out men men that are gritty
Rough and tough ready to haggle
She has a deal to the lane with a gaggle

Not sure you heard it particular laugh
The spell is cast down with the staph
But that's not all in loves embrace
True Hag revealed in terror you face

Wrath of sin the ugly Hag shown
Wouldn't have done it you'd only known
To late for that the cost is spent
Many of men have been where you went
 

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Darlene De Beaulieu February 9, 2018 at 1:08 PM Hello Ronald, I sense a message here for men.I do like this poem. have a nice day my friend. Ronald Kent February 9, 2018 at 3:44 PM Thanks for the comment Darlene.

Andrea Dietrich December 14, 2017 at 11:27 AM Oh, so will you keep an eye out for Guy Loranger? He would be around 64 now. He was tall and handsome. I'd say "dark" but maybe his hair has gone white. Hopefully he still has some!!! Ronald Kent December 14, 2017 at 4:27 PM I hope he is like french wine for you, only get's better with age.lol

Barry Stebbings November 19, 2017 at 11:23 AM Ha, ha, a most unpleasant creature. Enjoyed this one, Ronald. // Barry Ronald Kent November 19, 2017 at 11:33 AM Thanks for stopping by and leaving a comment.

Dean Wood July 5, 2017 at 7:50 AM I enjoyed this Ronald. I will be careful in the future. - Dean

Phil Capitano May 7, 2017 at 7:49 AM I think I met her once, lol, great story Ronald. Keep on writing. Ronald Kent May 7, 2017 at 12:54 PM Thank you for giving it a read.

Andrea Dietrich April 22, 2017 at 8:02 PM That hag does not sound like someone I'd want to meet up with. Was this for urban legend contest? Ronald Kent April 22, 2017 at 8:26 PM Yes it was, a little darker than usual. Not sure how it will be received. I've been away from writing for a while but always looking for prompts that trigger writing. Urban legend reminded me of an old story that was told to us about the island.