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Upon the hills, dry brush prevails, Thriving still on winter rains, summer's tale. Soon, the sun's embrace will come, Kindling fears of an inferno, a fiery drum. To mow this meadow, what's the best play? A herd of goats and sheep, grazing all day, Heavy machinery falters on the steep hillside, But sheep and goats revel, clearing the weed far and wide. As the day wanes, the shepherd must truck, His flock homeward bound, no time to luck. Counted them all, or so he thought, Yet, a darling ewe, Valentine's joy she sought. Atop the hill, love's sweet rendezvous, The shepherd found her, enjoying the view.

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Date: 3/21/2024 10:12:00 AM
This one is enchanting Jay. I truly enjoyed reading it. Congratulations! :)
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Date: 2/13/2024 12:46:00 PM
this is so delightful and charming. Well done, Jay.
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Date: 2/13/2024 12:08:00 PM
- A great place for the animals to graze...they enjoy all the fresh grass...a lovely poem, Jay :) - hugs
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