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Urban Alleys - Poet's Dozen Contest

Urban Alleys – poet’s dozen contest windblown city streets becalmed trash waiting idly beneath tour buses sweet breeze that will release the steam of gutter’s flowing stagnant stream rats - red eyes in furtive glances oil slicks glowing rainbow coats squinting sunrise peeking in the alley tarmac trash awaiting take-offs rippling rush night stalkers counting up their tally shape changing shadows on a soothing hush fresh cleansing gust of air a city’s blush 10/31/2015 submitted to – A Poets Dozen – Poetry Contest sponsor – Silent One

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Date: 11/9/2015 3:02:00 PM
Great realistic imagery, John! Congrats on your win! Love, KIm
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Date: 11/7/2015 3:17:00 PM
John, Congratulations on your Poet's Dozen win. Love SKAT
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Date: 11/7/2015 1:32:00 PM
Such a beautiful painting, John, good write congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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John Lawless
Date: 11/7/2015 2:56:00 PM
Thank you Eve for stopping by to comment.
Date: 11/6/2015 10:24:00 PM
While the subject is not normally beautiful through the naked eye, you have painted it with a poetic brush that grabs one's attention and makes it hard to look away... Congrats, John!
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John Lawless
Date: 11/7/2015 2:55:00 PM
Thanks Kim, there is a beauty in even the most sordid of visions.
Date: 11/6/2015 8:18:00 PM
John, congrats on your win and this poem speaks of the dirt and grime in city life so well. A7
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John Lawless
Date: 11/6/2015 9:13:00 PM
Thanks Robert there is an earthy dinginess to the bright lights
Date: 11/5/2015 6:36:00 PM
Very creative and rather deep. Deserves more than one read. I enjoyed it ... CayCay
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John Lawless
Date: 11/6/2015 9:10:00 PM
Thanks CayCay, I have always considered it a great compliment when a poem is read more than once.
Date: 10/31/2015 5:51:00 PM
hey now that is really URBAN!! some great and interesting images in this one!
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John Lawless
Date: 11/6/2015 9:09:00 PM
Thanks Andrea, I have lived and worked in Boston all my life. There is a rhythm, smell, taste, melody to the life of a city after dark.

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