David William Breidenthal Poet Free verse

Ur a Aw Awe Awes Aweso Awesome Awesomes Awesomesa Awesomesau Awesomesauc Awesomesauce

Aw, you're cute
Aw, was that your face?
I think I smacked your face
And gave you a bruise 
But that's old ass news

I know that I am silly Billy
I love dandelions honestly
Aw, they are so adorable
The birds in the sky are unbearable 

I hear them squeak
Even when they speak
I wish I can fly so high
That, I cannot truly deny

Aww they are cute as hell
Can't you tell? Oh well…
Birds are so absurd as I've heard
They are so feathery, oh my word

I was laughing while I was writing this all down
I was so gay and proud up in this terrestrial town 

Awww 
Awwww
Awwwwww
Awwww
Awww

I wrestle with thoughts of amusement
I fumble round with my love so pure, yet it's a disaster
And oh so benevolent and yet so violent 
Is there a cure to my impure, nasty and elevated laughter?

I'm dirty
Ew 
I'm flirty
Aw
I'm hideous
Ew
I'm delicious
Aw

Peace with peeps make me happy
And less crappy or snappy 
I can eat a Laffy Daffy 
Immaturity is part of my nature
I'm a wild child at heart 
So, laugh with me
Not at me

I'm so childish,
Yet oh so childlike
I would ask for a wish
To get myself a new bike 

Awwww
Awww
Aww
Awww
Awwww

I like you, 
I really do
She said, “Me too”
And I say “Whoohoooo! Aww, thanks a lot, gurl”
She said, “No problem, pal - any time awww”
Then, I said “Aww thanks, my beautiful friend of mine!”
She said, “We be fine as long as we both get our favorite iced coffees at Circle Commander!”

I developed feelings for her
I have a major crush on her
Hehe, can't help being me for sure 
She still seems pretty unsure

Awww no worries…
Wait there are worries
Jeez, don't sneeze
You'll give me allergies 
Aww and no one wants that, right?
Alright, good morning, my angel of delight

Aw, you are my love
Ew, you're not what I thought you were
Aw, His light is above
Ew, I give up fighting over her...she is like a worthless gossip or an unexpected whisper

I will endure
God is my cure
Laughter heals a broken soul
Laughter is what makes me beautiful
I am handsome
I am awesome
Awwwwwwwsome
Awwwwwsome
Awwsome
Give me some
Of your awesome

My dear, you're awwwmazing 
My love, you're dawwwwzling 
My friend, you're cute and you know it
My darling, don't throw a  fit 
Or you'll be marked down on my  list 
Or you might see me slightly pissed
Couldn't resist,
Feeling like I won't be missed

Awww I feel so bad for me……..
Yeah right, so pretty please…
Go somewhere else to flee
God, bring me comfort at ease 

Aww, I won't say that anymore
You are the one I awwwwdore 
I will not swear anymore, my Lord
If I do keep my promise, I'll get a spiritual reward -
The Kingdom of Awwwmazingness
So let us all awwwplause with happiness

Awww
Aww
Aw
Aww
Awww

Baby, you are sweet 
Like a caramel treat
I love you from head to feet
Yeah - hah - how freakin neat
I liked you when we did meet
Memories spent without you will never delete
You complete me, lady of my dreams
You lift up millions of others’ self-esteems
You embraced me and silenced my screams

Aww, thank you
My bountiful boo
What I say is true -
You're flawless - I caught the love flu
Yet you still don't get the clue 
I. Love. You.
Awwwwwwww
You do too?
I am in awwwwe

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Vladislav Raven October 23, 2018 at 6:00 PM Hi J.W. Have to agree with Line, this one does read like rap. It has that special beat. This is a style all of its own and it fits the words perfectly. Well crafted my friend. I liked the read. Have a wonderful Wednesday....Mike.

Line Gauthier October 17, 2018 at 11:35 AM Wow Boinnnng!! What a totally delightfully whimsical fun poem. It is like rap. I FAVE'd it because the style blew me away. I could read a whole book in this style. Totally entertaining. Bravo, JW.