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Why am I so wired Wound up so tight I think I might explode or crack At the least little extra added pressure It’s all way too much drama Messiness and chaos for my liking Enough is enough I just can’t bear it Don’t pile on any more Everybody stop just relax Take a breath We can’t keep up this pace Life isn’t supposed to be a race AP: 3rd place, Honorable Mention 2020 Posted on December 18, 2018

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Date: 12/19/2018 10:33:00 AM
Very true, nevertheless, there are so many in such great hurry and never do they have time to "see". If only. Well done.
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Date: 12/20/2018 8:49:00 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, ML.
Date: 12/19/2018 10:22:00 AM
Excellently penned, I can definitely relate to this! ;)
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Date: 12/20/2018 8:44:00 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Rhona.
Date: 12/18/2018 11:04:00 PM
Last line is the MORAL. I highly appreciate.
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Date: 12/18/2018 11:29:00 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Anisha. Much appreciated.

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