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Clutching at straws — to be willing to try anything to improve a difficult or unsatisfactory situation, even if it has little chance of success “And Then He Will Carry Me Away To His Castle, Where We Will Live Happily Ever After.” Snow White from Disney’s Snow White “Go on, have a bite” Evil Queen from Disney’s Snow White UPSTAGED I’m caught in mask, witch-green, a cleansing face. He hooked his chin in mirror’s reflection. Instead of me - he sought - his own embrace. This marriage once a snow-white complexion. Deciding to wear my wealth of jewels, my ace high heels, a great big smile, and wink. I try my bag of tricks from beauty school, clutching at straws, but he didn’t even blink. Then he saw me, I’m beautiful once more, renewed by morning light. His aftershave a lie - I bite! Left dizzy for encore, he ends us. His fate’s looking pretty grave. The magic mirror’s slap upstaged queen’s man. Knocked into kingdom come— ends princely span. 9/15/2020 Contest - CLUTCHING AT STRAWS Sponsor - Kai Michael Neumann howmanysyllables.com used

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Date: 10/6/2020 10:37:00 AM
- Lovely written, Kim ... likes it a lot - Congratulations on your great fourth place in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/6/2020 5:39:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!
Date: 10/6/2020 6:07:00 AM
Love it Kim! Congratulations! Linda
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/6/2020 5:34:00 PM
Thank you, Linda!
Date: 10/6/2020 5:09:00 AM
A inspiration you've discovered! Love it. God bless you and CONGRATS on your winning entry :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/6/2020 5:33:00 PM
Thank you, Regina!
Date: 9/17/2020 9:08:00 PM
Prince received his own comeup-ence if you ask me! I like the parody.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/18/2020 5:36:00 AM
Thank you, Caren! I had fun writing it :)
Date: 9/16/2020 10:56:00 PM
He must have narcissistic tendencies. Great poem. ~~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/17/2020 4:41:00 AM
The character, yes. A twist on the snow white tale. Hugs...Kim
Date: 9/16/2020 7:31:00 PM
That is one mirror I would not mind breaking! Cute story, Kim. Good luck!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/16/2020 10:30:00 PM
Thank you, Daniel! :)

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