Upstaged

Clutching at straws — to be willing to try anything to improve a difficult or unsatisfactory situation, even if it has little chance of success

“And Then He Will Carry Me Away To His Castle, Where We Will Live Happily Ever After.”            Snow White from Disney’s Snow White

“Go on, have a bite”     Evil Queen from Disney’s Snow White

UPSTAGED

I’m caught in mask, witch-green, a cleansing face.
He hooked his chin in mirror’s reflection.
Instead of me -  he sought - his own embrace.
This marriage once a snow-white complexion.

Deciding to wear my wealth of jewels,
my ace high heels, a great big smile, and wink.
I try my bag of tricks from beauty school,
clutching at straws, but he didn’t even blink.

Then he saw me, I’m beautiful once more,
renewed by morning light. His aftershave
a lie - I bite! Left dizzy for encore,
he ends us. His fate’s looking pretty grave.

The magic mirror’s slap upstaged queen’s man.
Knocked into kingdom come— ends princely span.

9/15/2020
Contest - CLUTCHING AT STRAWS
Sponsor - Kai Michael Neumann

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Andresen Avatar
October 6, 2020 at 10:37 AM
- Lovely written, Kim ... likes it a lot - Congratulations on your great fourth place in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rodrigues Avatar
October 6, 2020 at 5:39 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!
Fowler Avatar
October 6, 2020 at 6:07 AM
Love it Kim! Congratulations! Linda
Rodrigues Avatar
October 6, 2020 at 5:34 PM
Thank you, Linda!
Mcintosh Avatar
October 6, 2020 at 5:09 AM
A inspiration you've discovered! Love it. God bless you and CONGRATS on your winning entry :)
Rodrigues Avatar
October 6, 2020 at 5:33 PM
Thank you, Regina!
Krutsinger Avatar
September 17, 2020 at 9:08 PM
Prince received his own comeup-ence if you ask me! I like the parody.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 18, 2020 at 5:36 AM
Thank you, Caren! I had fun writing it :)
Buhagiar Avatar
September 16, 2020 at 10:56 PM
He must have narcissistic tendencies. Great poem. ~~
Rodrigues Avatar
September 17, 2020 at 4:41 AM
The character, yes. A twist on the snow white tale. Hugs...Kim
Turner Avatar
September 16, 2020 at 7:31 PM
That is one mirror I would not mind breaking! Cute story, Kim. Good luck!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 16, 2020 at 10:30 PM
Thank you, Daniel! :)
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