Upside Down World

Though not aesthetically pleasing,
and  makes me the victim of teasing,
don't know why all the fuss
there is one simple plus-
it stops my naughty bits from freezing!

For contest 'Upside down world', sponsor Eve Roper
24th December 2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Laurie Avatar
July 23, 2018 at 10:24 PM
G'day Viv … you must get your priorities right Viv. We can do without nose, ears, fingers, and toes, but the family jewels must be preserved - another giggler to amuse us - Lindsay
Roper Avatar
April 12, 2018 at 11:04 AM
dropping back to read your Limrick,, still very enjoyable.. Hugs Eve
Guzzi Avatar
January 22, 2018 at 7:48 PM
Hi Viv SO glad to see another one of us oldie but goodies is still here on soup! Light & Love
Wigley Avatar
January 25, 2018 at 1:31 AM
Hi Debbie, yes, I'm thinning at the temples and falling to bits, but in my eyes you shall remain timeless and youthful. Lots of young blood spicing up the soup, indeed. I do worry when I haven't heard from folks like Lindsay laurie and Brian Baumgarten, though... Viv x
Allison Avatar
January 13, 2018 at 8:11 PM
dropping back with my congrats Mr Viv:-) hugs jan xx
Wigley Avatar
January 14, 2018 at 3:40 AM
Thanks, Jan, seems a lifetime ago since it thawed round here x
Murray Avatar
January 8, 2018 at 2:22 PM
I wrote one where the naughty bits melted in the sun. Well done!
Pett Avatar
January 7, 2018 at 10:29 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win with your very clever limerick Viv. :))
Canerdy Avatar
January 7, 2018 at 7:02 AM
Very clever, Viv--CONGRATS on your win. Janice
Gauthier Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 3:46 PM
Congrats on your win, Viv. Well done.
Lamoureux Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 12:55 PM
Ha ha I think this is perfect Viv. Thanks for your visits and comments on my Limerick. I also see you have visited and commented on all the entrants. You are a gentleman.
Callus Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 9:44 AM
Back with congratulations, Viv...there was no doubt that this would fly high:) Regards // paul
Y. Avatar
January 5, 2018 at 9:02 PM
Hi Viv, Congrats on your winning write:-) Alexis
Wigley Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 12:48 AM
Thanks, Alexis, all good fun. Viv x
Roper Avatar
January 5, 2018 at 7:56 PM
Congratulations on your win, Viv, :) Hugs Eve ~`*
Wigley Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 12:48 AM
Thanks, Eve, a fun contest with a suitably fun crop of entries. Viv x
Thomas Avatar
January 4, 2018 at 12:26 PM
Lolol Viv too funny!
Wigley Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 12:49 AM
Thanks Shadow, appreciate the visit.
Dietrich Avatar
December 29, 2017 at 4:18 PM
GREAT closing line, Viv. And great humor. That was one fun contest, wasn't it? Thanks again for the food fight too.
Wigley Avatar
December 30, 2017 at 12:50 AM
Thanks Andrea, it's been an upside down year, glad to see the back of it. Have a good 2018. Viv x
Callus Avatar
December 29, 2017 at 4:01 PM
Love your humour, Viv:) gl in the contest. May I take this opportunity to wish you and your loved ones a happy and serene new year. Regards // paul
Wigley Avatar
December 30, 2017 at 12:50 AM
Thanks Paul, and all the best to you and yours. Regards, Viv
Dutta Avatar
December 25, 2017 at 9:51 PM
Exact. I agree with you. Merry Christmas
Wigley Avatar
December 30, 2017 at 12:51 AM
Thanks Anisha, best wishes to you, too x
Allison Avatar
December 25, 2017 at 1:31 AM
Absolutely hilarious Mr Viv! Of course i would have used goolies not naughty bits but I'm naughty like that lol:-) thinking of you at Christmas:-) hugs jan xx
One Avatar
December 24, 2017 at 2:18 PM
Ay up me duck.. You can't beat that Derbyshire humour my friend.. This is one of the best I have read for the contest lol..
Wigley Avatar
December 25, 2017 at 1:29 AM
Thanks, Silent One, I'm sure I won't be the first to target that bit of anatomy. Have a good Christmas! Regards, Viv
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