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Upside Down Toilet

ocean heat rises
moisture fogs and falls as rain
surface weather clouds

high cold air layers
hold the storm down as a dome
tempretures rising

with an earth style spin
and heat vortexing upwards
a flushed toilet bowl

just keeps on filling
with excess of ocean heat
a continued flush

till earths rotation
drives ocean weather on land
where much less heats lost

the dome stops filling
and fog moisture stops raining
the spinning flush ends

clouds clear sun appears
and there is  everywhere
what goes up comes down

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 10/22/2018 2:16:00 PM
Call the clean-up committee! LOL. Thoroughly enjoyed this one, S.B! ~ Gershon
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Date: 9/28/2018 1:11:00 PM
Enjoyed the series of haiku . love phyl
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Date: 9/16/2018 4:08:00 AM
the second last line should have appeared as "and there is sh i t everywhere'
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