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Upside Down Toilet

ocean heat rises moisture fogs and falls as rain surface weather clouds high cold air layers hold the storm down as a dome tempretures rising with an earth style spin and heat vortexing upwards a flushed toilet bowl just keeps on filling with excess of ocean heat a continued flush till earths rotation drives ocean weather on land where much less heats lost the dome stops filling and fog moisture stops raining the spinning flush ends clouds clear sun appears and there is everywhere what goes up comes down

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Date: 10/22/2018 2:16:00 PM
Call the clean-up committee! LOL. Thoroughly enjoyed this one, S.B! ~ Gershon
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Date: 9/28/2018 1:11:00 PM
Enjoyed the series of haiku . love phyl
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Date: 9/16/2018 4:08:00 AM
the second last line should have appeared as "and there is sh i t everywhere'
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