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UPSIDE-DOWN

upside-down ~ trees hang from roots, kind of like carrots ~ not orange. haha ~ soil’s simply apple red. there’s an upside-down wine house that lives next to the oak. i bet you can tell, but only standing on your silly head, where your two feet touch clouds.
1/27/2017

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Date: 1/29/2017 10:15:00 AM
this reads like an ode to "down under"
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/29/2017 11:17:00 AM
:)
Date: 1/28/2017 2:27:00 AM
No far from reality dear, Kim, haha! We are upside-down . We do not realise it for we are like that since birth! Haha! Well done!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/28/2017 8:28:00 AM
Love it, Demetrios! What a great take on my poem! Thank you!
Date: 1/27/2017 8:44:00 PM
this is really cute, Kim. I likes it!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/27/2017 9:31:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea!