upset with spring

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Poetry/Senryu/upset with spring
Copyright Protected, ID 03-1630-756-19
All Rights Reserved, 2024, Constance La France

Written, March 19, 2024
For the International Contest, Senryu's 3 Rhymed, 3 Unrhymed
Sponsor, Hilo Poet, Judged 05/01/2024

Ninth Place

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nature so upset it is spring and is snow wet ~ did you just forget oh how can it snow when above sun is a glow ~ with green grass to mow I have planted seeds for my garden this heart bleeds ~ but growing like weeds it is not winter nature we have a problem ~ also not quite spring snowflakes are falling like sweet kisses from heaven ~ give winter a kick lets get back on track tomorrow I expect spring ~ enough is enough

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Hilo Poet

Date: 5/1/2024 1:38:00 AM

I am very happy for you, Constance, with your beautifully emotive worded poetry, to have won a purposeful placement in the Senryu contest my friend. Aloha, William.

Constance La France
Date: 5/1/2024 7:17:00 AM

Hilo, thank you for the contest and my placement and for the compliment and congratulations, blessings, Constance

Jay Narain

Date: 3/20/2024 10:55:00 AM

Nice poem. Winter keeps on coming back till the end of March. Some days are sunny and beautiful, some are dreary and wintery. But soon we will lose spring fever, because we will be in summer.

Constance La France
Date: 3/26/2024 8:31:00 AM

Jay, thank you for the compliment, here in Canada we usually go from Winter to Spring overnight but that is not happening this year, hugs, Constance

Michael Tor

Date: 3/19/2024 7:54:00 PM

Constance wouldn't it be great to have the right weather at the right time? we just went through the warmest winter in upstate NY of all time. This is one time I did not mind the wrong weather for the Season lol. Loved how you wrote this and as always a wonderful Poetess to read you are. Have a great week...

Constance La France
Date: 3/26/2024 8:32:00 AM

Michael, thank you for the compliment, comment and for sharing, hugs, Constance