Ups and Downs

At the beginning it is slow 
Speeding up
Like the fastest fighter jet ever
Faster
Faster
Screaming
Twisting Turning 
Flying Soaring
Endless ups and downs
Anticipation of an end
Finally the ends has come
Why don’t we give it another go
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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January 23, 2016 at 9:21 PM
HUFFERFISH:) Congratulations on having your poem featured in the soups, Home Page. ~SKAT~
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December 14, 2015 at 11:22 PM
HUFFERFISH, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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December 14, 2015 at 2:18 PM
Hi Hufferfish, this is such an excellent first posting that I enjoyed reading! I look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7 (which is the highest score you can get or receive)! Pandita
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December 14, 2015 at 11:34 AM
Hi Hufferfish, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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