Upon the Wind

It was a still October night when I was cold and all alone
as through the forest of my mind in thought I wandered on my own
The moon lay hidden by the clouds that rested heavy on my eyes
and as I stumbled through the dark I felt the wind begin to rise
I heard my name upon the wind as he was flying through the night
he called to me to come to him so he could take me on his flight
In soothing tones he spoke to me, his voice sang gentle through my mind
and in a flowing melody he spoke of wonders I would find

The wind sang out to me that night and with his song I was entranced
and it was windward  my thoughts turned as in my heart his tempest danced
But still my feet stayed on the ground for I was too afraid to fly
and as the wind washed over me in mournful howls I heard him cry
As indecision split my mind my eyes were stinging with my tears
and tenderly with his caress he tried to ease me from my fears 
Across my face his gentle breath had blown the clouds out of my eyes
and then he summoned to the moon who came to light my darkened skies

And when the moon had risen high his servants came into my sight
these waiting visions that I saw were whispers in the silver light
They came to carry me to him who now is waiting there for me
they said they'd help me find my way into his arms where I'd  fly free
They said they wouldn't let me fall, they told me that they understand
and so I let them lead the way as I had given them my hand
Then I was lifted off the ground and we were soaring through the sky
and as I came into his arms he took away my fear to fly

Above the earth he carried me and as I watched it spin around
from in the heavens I could see all of the wonders to be found
I'll fly forever in his arms, among the stars where I will play
across the never ending sky, the spinning world so far away
Upon the wind you'll hear my song as we are sailing through the sky
and joyous is the song I sing as we are scaling ever high
I am alive upon the wind,  I'm flying in his arms tonight
and like an echo I will fade as we are blowing out of sight......




Inspired by Elaine Georges' Tell Me A Story contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 11/23/2012 4:46:00 PM
You have been gone so LONG..why did you stay gone, I can only imagine the worst and it makes me sad, sad to lose a good friend and a fine poet COME BACK!! Light & Love
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Date: 1/5/2011 3:35:00 AM
Wow
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Date: 11/20/2009 11:49:00 AM
Thank you for your participation in my contest, Robin. Love, Lainie
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Date: 11/8/2009 12:56:00 PM
Dear Robin, Thank you for your entry in my contest. Love, Lainie
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Date: 11/3/2009 9:03:00 PM
Narratives are my favorite verse forms and you have always been one of my favorite poets, Robin. You heart and soul are revealed in your amazing writes. Thank you for taking us on this journey with you. What a story! Much love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/30/2009 11:54:00 AM
Love it! Such an uplifting story in poetry form. Wow!!! The rhyme works well. Good use of imagery. Best wishes in the contest. This is a winner in my book. Thank you for your kind comments. Karen
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Date: 10/30/2009 7:31:00 AM
Very beautiful poem Robin, if I were to write such a poem, I would have to call it"A Soul Set Free Upon The Winds Of Love" As I have had beautiful dreams of such a flight. Awesome, inspiration, Good expression. Sincerely, Love, Moses
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Date: 10/30/2009 7:07:00 AM
Robin, I love the mental and emotional freedom this story brings as one imagines the forest, the aloneness, and soaring above it all with peace and guidance. Your story is beautiful. Love, Dane
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Date: 10/30/2009 6:53:00 AM
great write, love the last line , good luck Johnathon
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Date: 10/30/2009 1:48:00 AM
Best wishes with this Robin & thank you for your welcome blog comments Rgds Brian
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Date: 10/29/2009 6:27:00 PM
This is a lovely story, well written. good luck. Pam.
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Date: 10/29/2009 6:09:00 PM
A wonderful, mystical story, and a magic poem that tells a story! Good luck in the contest, Robin! ~ Carrie
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Date: 10/29/2009 5:26:00 PM
nicley penned,
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Date: 10/29/2009 4:28:00 PM
so lovely you sound like Louise Lane? smooch! Light & Love
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Date: 10/29/2009 3:45:00 PM
Good luck in the contest. Interesting story.
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