Upon the Train Tracks of Life

Trains on theses tracks of Life are moving continually
Their view of events unfolds and are unraveling rapidly, consecutively

They are a multifaceted composite of compositions
A living scenic picture album of underlining photos,
enhanced with side glossaries
These give views of living menageries
and of many local communities

The Trains do make some full stops:
This like love and romance at the highest of
zenith mountainous tops

At the Trains end it will be discontinued:
The last stop for you and me naturally

Yet, there will be a resurrection for all true Saints:
who are on the Train’s eternal manifested ledger graciously

Then joyous, rapturous blissful heaven, heavenlies and all
of eternity, the most happily

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 2/12/2018 10:55:00 AM
This too is a very meaningful poem, Ronald. For those who travel with open eyes, it should not be difficult to recognize the beauty and power of the Creator; the last stop is just the start of a new eternal one. Regards & blessings // paul
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Ronald A. Williams
Date: 6/22/2018 8:47:00 PM
Just touched up the poem. I hope that you like it even more. Blessings
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Ronald A. Williams
Date: 4/15/2018 3:07:00 PM
One last inspirational touches done. Read again.
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Ronald A. Williams
Date: 3/16/2018 2:42:00 PM
Hi Paul, please view and read this poem again. It is new similar version that is even better. I did a few professional touch ups. I hope you like it. Blessings. I try to do art work.
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Ronald A. Williams
Date: 3/9/2018 12:14:00 PM
Just did some ; : , touch up. Thanks, Blessing.
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Ronald A. Williams
Date: 2/18/2018 7:00:00 AM
Sorry, a final semi-colon and a comma touch up. Amen, blessings.
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Ronald A. Williams
Date: 2/16/2018 2:41:00 PM
Sorry, but the poem spoke again; one last revision.
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Ronald A. Williams
Date: 2/16/2018 12:21:00 PM
Thanks, one final adjustment of stanza breaks. Take care and blessings.
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Ronald A. Williams
Date: 2/14/2018 8:58:00 PM
Please, take another look. I know that you will certainly love this revised version, did extra work. Blessings. I believe that it is now in the classical category. Let me know if you thinks so. Amen, Blessings and Take care.
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Ronald A. Williams
Date: 2/12/2018 11:31:00 AM
Amen, my fellow brother. Blessings in the Lord Jesus Christ. Also, when you have some time visit my website www.jesuschristvisitation.net
Date: 1/11/2018 3:49:00 PM
Hi Ronald, if you go to the forms section it will give you the rules for each form. Learning the forms will provide you more tools to be able to better articulate you message. I equate it to a painter having more paint brushes to express their vision.
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Ronald A. Williams
Date: 6/22/2018 8:47:00 PM
Just touched up the poem. I hope that you like it even more. Blessings
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Ronald A. Williams
Date: 4/15/2018 3:07:00 PM
One last inspirational touches done. Read again.
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Ronald A. Williams
Date: 3/16/2018 2:41:00 PM
Hi Richard, please view and read this poem again. It is new similar version that is even better. I did a few professional touch ups. I hope you like it. Blessings. I try to do art work.
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Ronald A. Williams
Date: 3/9/2018 12:14:00 PM
Just did some ; : , touch up. Thanks, Blessing.
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Ronald A. Williams
Date: 2/18/2018 7:00:00 AM
Sorry, a final semi-colon and a comma touch up. Amen, blessings.
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Ronald A. Williams
Date: 2/16/2018 2:41:00 PM
Sorry, but the poem spoke again; one last revision.
Williams Avatar
Ronald A. Williams
Date: 2/16/2018 12:21:00 PM
Thanks, one final adjustment of stanza breaks. Take care and blessings.
Williams Avatar
Ronald A. Williams
Date: 2/14/2018 8:57:00 PM
Please, take another look. I know that you will certainly love this revised version, did extra work. Blessings. I believe that it is now in the classical category. Let me know if you thinks so. Amen, Blessings and Take care.
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Ronald A. Williams
Date: 2/9/2018 5:41:00 PM
Check it out again. One last stop.
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Ronald A. Williams
Date: 2/2/2018 12:30:00 PM
Now expounded into a two stanza quatrain. Enjoy.
Date: 1/3/2018 1:56:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your work..i appreciate your writing about your faith..Thanks for dropping by..Sara
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Ronald A. Williams
Date: 6/22/2018 8:46:00 PM
Just touched up the poem. I hope that you like it even more. Blessings
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Ronald A. Williams
Date: 4/15/2018 3:06:00 PM
One last inspirational touches done. Read again.
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Ronald A. Williams
Date: 3/16/2018 2:41:00 PM
Hi Sara, please view and read this poem again. It is new similar version that is even better. I did a few professional touch ups. I hope you like it. Blessings. I try to do art work.
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Ronald A. Williams
Date: 3/9/2018 12:13:00 PM
Just did some ; : , touch up. Thanks, Blessing.
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Ronald A. Williams
Date: 2/18/2018 7:00:00 AM
Sorry, a final semi-colon and a comma touch up. Amen, blessings.
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Ronald A. Williams
Date: 2/16/2018 2:41:00 PM
Sorry, but the poem spoke again; one last revision.
Williams Avatar
Ronald A. Williams
Date: 2/16/2018 12:21:00 PM
Thanks, one final adjustment of stanza breaks. Take care and blessings.
Williams Avatar
Ronald A. Williams
Date: 2/14/2018 8:57:00 PM
Please, take another look. I know that you will certainly love this revised version, did extra work. Blessings. I believe that it is now in the classical category. Let me know if you thinks so. Amen, Blessings and Take care.
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Ronald A. Williams
Date: 2/9/2018 5:40:00 PM
Check it out again. One last stop.
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Ronald A. Williams
Date: 2/2/2018 12:30:00 PM
Now expounded into a two stanza quatrain. Enjoy.
Date: 12/7/2017 8:11:00 AM
Thanks Freddie, my friend as always. All praise and Blessings belong to Him. Question, how many Black Poets are noted properly as being some of the World's best Poets currently. Also, as a black man not after they are dead and gone???
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Ronald A. Williams
Date: 12/8/2017 12:16:00 PM
Only the Title to immortalize. Thanks
Date: 12/7/2017 5:55:00 AM
I LOVE the final edit, Ronald. Your wise words are (pardon the pun) poetry in motion. Beautiful truths made plain. The viewing of nature, life and things so wondrously. God Almighty in all His Sovereignty. Great lines ... great poem! Keep the love and knowledge of God flowing thru your blessed pen. Love and many blessings of peace always.
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Date: 6/22/2018 8:46:00 PM
Just touched up the poem. I hope that you like it even more. Blessings
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Ronald A. Williams
Date: 4/15/2018 3:06:00 PM
One last inspirational touches done. Read again.
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Ronald A. Williams
Date: 3/16/2018 2:39:00 PM
Hi Vijay, please view and read this poem again. It is new similar version that is even better. I did a few professional touch ups. I hope you like it. Blessings. I try to do art work.
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Ronald A. Williams
Date: 3/16/2018 2:39:00 PM
Excuse, me, Hi Freddie, please view and read this poem again. It is new similar version that is even better. I did a few professional touch ups. I hope you like it. Blessings. I try to do art work.
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Ronald A. Williams
Date: 3/9/2018 12:13:00 PM
Just did some ; : , touch up. Thanks, Blessing.
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Ronald A. Williams
Date: 2/18/2018 6:59:00 AM
Sorry, a final semi-colon and a comma touch up. Amen, blessings.
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Ronald A. Williams
Date: 2/16/2018 2:41:00 PM
Sorry, but the poem spoke again; one last revision.
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Ronald A. Williams
Date: 2/16/2018 12:20:00 PM
Thanks, one final adjustment of stanza breaks. Take care and blessings.
Williams Avatar
Ronald A. Williams
Date: 2/14/2018 8:57:00 PM
Please, take another look. I know that you will certainly love this revised version, did extra work. Blessings. I believe that it is now in the classical category. Let me know if you thinks so. Amen, Blessings and Take care.
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Ronald A. Williams
Date: 2/9/2018 5:40:00 PM
Check it out again. One last stop.
Date: 12/2/2017 5:49:00 PM
Especially if the tracks lead to the All Mighty...
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Ronald A. Williams
Date: 6/22/2018 8:46:00 PM
Just touched up the poem. I hope that you like it even more. Blessings
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Ronald A. Williams
Date: 4/15/2018 3:03:00 PM
One last inspirational touches done. Read again.
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Ronald A. Williams
Date: 3/16/2018 2:37:00 PM
Hi Arturo, please view and read this poem again. It is new similar version that is even better. I did a few professional touch ups. I hope you like it. Blessings. I try to do art work.
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Ronald A. Williams
Date: 3/9/2018 12:13:00 PM
Just did some ; : , touch up. Thanks, Blessing.
Williams Avatar
Ronald A. Williams
Date: 2/18/2018 6:59:00 AM
Sorry, a final semi-colon and a comma touch up. Amen, blessings.
Williams Avatar
Ronald A. Williams
Date: 2/16/2018 2:40:00 PM
Sorry, but the poem spoke again; one last revision.
Williams Avatar
Ronald A. Williams
Date: 2/16/2018 2:39:00 PM
Sorry put the poem spoke again; one last revision.
Williams Avatar
Ronald A. Williams
Date: 2/16/2018 12:20:00 PM
Thanks, one final adjustment of stanza breaks. Take care and blessings.
Williams Avatar
Ronald A. Williams
Date: 2/14/2018 8:57:00 PM
Please, take another look. I know that you will certainly love this revised version, did extra work. Blessings. I believe that it is now in the classical category. Let me know if you thinks so. Amen, Blessings and Take care.
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Ronald A. Williams
Date: 2/9/2018 5:39:00 PM
Check it out again. One last stop.
Date: 12/2/2017 5:43:00 PM
Insightful!
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Ronald A. Williams
Date: 6/22/2018 8:46:00 PM
Just touched up the poem. I hope that you like it even more. Blessings
Williams Avatar
Ronald A. Williams
Date: 4/15/2018 3:03:00 PM
One last inspirational touches done. Read again.
Williams Avatar
Ronald A. Williams
Date: 3/16/2018 2:37:00 PM
Hi Vijay, please view and read this poem again. It is new similar version that is even better. I did a few professional touch ups. I hope you like it. Blessings. I try to do art work.
Williams Avatar
Ronald A. Williams
Date: 3/9/2018 12:12:00 PM
Just did some ; : , touch up. Thanks, Blessing.
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Ronald A. Williams
Date: 2/18/2018 6:59:00 AM
Sorry, a final semi-colon and a comma touch up. Amen, blessings.
Williams Avatar
Ronald A. Williams
Date: 2/16/2018 2:40:00 PM
Sorry, but the poem spoke again; one last revision.
Williams Avatar
Ronald A. Williams
Date: 2/16/2018 2:39:00 PM
Sorry put the poem spoke again; one last revision.
Williams Avatar
Ronald A. Williams
Date: 2/16/2018 12:20:00 PM
Thanks, one final adjustment of stanza breaks. Take care and blessings.
Williams Avatar
Ronald A. Williams
Date: 2/14/2018 8:57:00 PM
Please, take another look. I know that you will certainly love this revised version, did extra work. Blessings. I believe that it is now in the classical category. Let me know if you thinks so. Amen, Blessings and Take care.
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Ronald A. Williams
Date: 2/9/2018 5:39:00 PM
Check it out again. One last stop.
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