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Upon the Train Tracks of Life

Trains on theses tracks of Life is moving continually Their view of events unfolds and is unraveling consecutively It is a multifaceted composite composition: A living scenic picture album of underlining photos enhanced with side glossaries; these giving views of living menageries and of many local communities Trains do make some full stops: This like love and romance it being at the highest of zenith mountainous tops At Trains end it will be discontinued: The last stop for you and me Yet, there will be a resurrection for all true Saints; who are on the Train’s eternal manifested ledger graciously Then joyous, rapturous blissful heavenlies and eternity In the very presence of God, ever most happily; a perpetual beautiful everlasting life's other story

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Paul Callus

Date: 2/12/2018 10:55:00 AM

This too is a very meaningful poem, Ronald. For those who travel with open eyes, it should not be difficult to recognize the beauty and power of the Creator; the last stop is just the start of a new eternal one. Regards & blessings // paul

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 6/22/2018 8:47:00 PM

Just touched up the poem. I hope that you like it even more. Blessings

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 4/15/2018 3:07:00 PM

One last inspirational touches done. Read again.

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 3/16/2018 2:42:00 PM

Hi Paul, please view and read this poem again. It is new similar version that is even better. I did a few professional touch ups. I hope you like it. Blessings. I try to do art work.

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 3/9/2018 12:14:00 PM

Just did some ; : , touch up. Thanks, Blessing.

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 2/18/2018 7:00:00 AM

Sorry, a final semi-colon and a comma touch up. Amen, blessings.

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 2/16/2018 2:41:00 PM

Sorry, but the poem spoke again; one last revision.

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 2/16/2018 12:21:00 PM

Thanks, one final adjustment of stanza breaks. Take care and blessings.

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 2/14/2018 8:58:00 PM

Please, take another look. I know that you will certainly love this revised version, did extra work. Blessings. I believe that it is now in the classical category. Let me know if you thinks so. Amen, Blessings and Take care.

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 2/12/2018 11:31:00 AM

Amen, my fellow brother. Blessings in the Lord Jesus Christ. Also, when you have some time visit my website www.jesuschristvisitation.net

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/11/2018 3:49:00 PM

Hi Ronald, if you go to the forms section it will give you the rules for each form. Learning the forms will provide you more tools to be able to better articulate you message. I equate it to a painter having more paint brushes to express their vision.

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 6/22/2018 8:47:00 PM

Just touched up the poem. I hope that you like it even more. Blessings

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 4/15/2018 3:07:00 PM

One last inspirational touches done. Read again.

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 3/16/2018 2:41:00 PM

Hi Richard, please view and read this poem again. It is new similar version that is even better. I did a few professional touch ups. I hope you like it. Blessings. I try to do art work.

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 3/9/2018 12:14:00 PM

Just did some ; : , touch up. Thanks, Blessing.

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 2/18/2018 7:00:00 AM

Sorry, a final semi-colon and a comma touch up. Amen, blessings.

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 2/16/2018 2:41:00 PM

Sorry, but the poem spoke again; one last revision.

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 2/16/2018 12:21:00 PM

Thanks, one final adjustment of stanza breaks. Take care and blessings.

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 2/14/2018 8:57:00 PM

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 2/9/2018 5:41:00 PM

Check it out again. One last stop.

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 2/2/2018 12:30:00 PM

Now expounded into a two stanza quatrain. Enjoy.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/3/2018 1:56:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your work..i appreciate your writing about your faith..Thanks for dropping by..Sara

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 6/22/2018 8:46:00 PM

Just touched up the poem. I hope that you like it even more. Blessings

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 4/15/2018 3:06:00 PM

One last inspirational touches done. Read again.

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 3/16/2018 2:41:00 PM

Hi Sara, please view and read this poem again. It is new similar version that is even better. I did a few professional touch ups. I hope you like it. Blessings. I try to do art work.

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 3/9/2018 12:13:00 PM

Just did some ; : , touch up. Thanks, Blessing.

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 2/18/2018 7:00:00 AM

Sorry, a final semi-colon and a comma touch up. Amen, blessings.

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 2/16/2018 2:41:00 PM

Sorry, but the poem spoke again; one last revision.

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 2/16/2018 12:21:00 PM

Thanks, one final adjustment of stanza breaks. Take care and blessings.

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 2/14/2018 8:57:00 PM

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 2/9/2018 5:40:00 PM

Check it out again. One last stop.

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 2/2/2018 12:30:00 PM

Now expounded into a two stanza quatrain. Enjoy.

Ronald A. Williams

Date: 12/7/2017 8:11:00 AM

Thanks Freddie, my friend as always. All praise and Blessings belong to Him. Question, how many Black Poets are noted properly as being some of the World's best Poets currently. Also, as a black man not after they are dead and gone???

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 12/8/2017 12:16:00 PM

Only the Title to immortalize. Thanks

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 12/7/2017 5:55:00 AM

I LOVE the final edit, Ronald. Your wise words are (pardon the pun) poetry in motion. Beautiful truths made plain. The viewing of nature, life and things so wondrously. God Almighty in all His Sovereignty. Great lines ... great poem! Keep the love and knowledge of God flowing thru your blessed pen. Love and many blessings of peace always.

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 6/22/2018 8:46:00 PM

Just touched up the poem. I hope that you like it even more. Blessings

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 4/15/2018 3:06:00 PM

One last inspirational touches done. Read again.

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 3/16/2018 2:39:00 PM

Hi Vijay, please view and read this poem again. It is new similar version that is even better. I did a few professional touch ups. I hope you like it. Blessings. I try to do art work.

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 3/16/2018 2:39:00 PM

Excuse, me, Hi Freddie, please view and read this poem again. It is new similar version that is even better. I did a few professional touch ups. I hope you like it. Blessings. I try to do art work.

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 3/9/2018 12:13:00 PM

Just did some ; : , touch up. Thanks, Blessing.

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 2/18/2018 6:59:00 AM

Sorry, a final semi-colon and a comma touch up. Amen, blessings.

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 2/16/2018 2:41:00 PM

Sorry, but the poem spoke again; one last revision.

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 2/16/2018 12:20:00 PM

Thanks, one final adjustment of stanza breaks. Take care and blessings.

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 2/14/2018 8:57:00 PM

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 2/9/2018 5:40:00 PM

Check it out again. One last stop.

Arturo Michael

Date: 12/2/2017 5:49:00 PM

Especially if the tracks lead to the All Mighty...

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 6/22/2018 8:46:00 PM

Just touched up the poem. I hope that you like it even more. Blessings

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 4/15/2018 3:03:00 PM

One last inspirational touches done. Read again.

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 3/16/2018 2:37:00 PM

Hi Arturo, please view and read this poem again. It is new similar version that is even better. I did a few professional touch ups. I hope you like it. Blessings. I try to do art work.

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 3/9/2018 12:13:00 PM

Just did some ; : , touch up. Thanks, Blessing.

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 2/18/2018 6:59:00 AM

Sorry, a final semi-colon and a comma touch up. Amen, blessings.

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 2/16/2018 2:40:00 PM

Sorry, but the poem spoke again; one last revision.

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 2/16/2018 2:39:00 PM

Sorry put the poem spoke again; one last revision.

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 2/16/2018 12:20:00 PM

Thanks, one final adjustment of stanza breaks. Take care and blessings.

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 2/14/2018 8:57:00 PM

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 2/9/2018 5:39:00 PM

Check it out again. One last stop.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/2/2017 5:43:00 PM

Insightful!

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 6/22/2018 8:46:00 PM

Just touched up the poem. I hope that you like it even more. Blessings

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 4/15/2018 3:03:00 PM

One last inspirational touches done. Read again.

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 3/16/2018 2:37:00 PM

Hi Vijay, please view and read this poem again. It is new similar version that is even better. I did a few professional touch ups. I hope you like it. Blessings. I try to do art work.

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 3/9/2018 12:12:00 PM

Just did some ; : , touch up. Thanks, Blessing.

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 2/18/2018 6:59:00 AM

Sorry, a final semi-colon and a comma touch up. Amen, blessings.

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 2/16/2018 2:40:00 PM

Sorry, but the poem spoke again; one last revision.

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 2/16/2018 2:39:00 PM

Sorry put the poem spoke again; one last revision.

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 2/16/2018 12:20:00 PM

Thanks, one final adjustment of stanza breaks. Take care and blessings.

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 2/14/2018 8:57:00 PM

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 2/9/2018 5:39:00 PM

Check it out again. One last stop.