Upon the Trail

Before me, was a fork upon the trail;
   go left- go right- confused, I just stood there.
      Then took a chance- not seeing past the veil
of crowded ferns that hid the views with care.

Not far into my chosen turn on right,
   I saw the tattered roof, burst window, porch-
      of the decaying structure- and, on-site,
a weathered chair that held a rusted torch.

The door, ajar- displayed a worn staircase
   with some steps missing, quite in disarray.
      Then, just like that- it floated down with grace-
a witch- with twigs and black rosette bouquet!

In black translucent skirt and cloak- she flew
   above the stairs, past chair- to tall, dry, grass-
      where once, for sure, a lovely garden grew.
But now- loud whispers warned, "do not trespass"!

I started backing up and then- oh, no!
   The murmurings became a screeching scream!
      Both ghost and house exploded in a glow-
as I woke up- to end my dreadful dream!


July 15, 2020

~1st Place~
Contest: Decaying House
Sponsor: Constance La France
Judged: July 19, 2020
 
Rules: 
Write a poem on the theme of finding a decaying house
Use the 10 words (shown in bold) once only and in any order
Title is three words only from poem's first line
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020


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Date: 7/27/2020 4:44:00 AM
That was a mysteriously penned spooky dream Sandra. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 7/25/2020 9:29:00 AM
Sandra, congratulations on your win in my decaying house contest with this excellent write, a FAV for me _Constance
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Date: 7/19/2020 3:25:00 PM
what a vivid dream indeed Sandra, many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/15/2020 1:02:00 PM
Sandra, what a imagination you have! Your talent for iambic pentameter shines brightly in this nightmare encounter with the witch and her dilapidated house. Best wishes in the contest ~ John
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