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Upon Our Sands They Crawl

These creatures creep from the wetted deep As the waters cascade as they climb the beach Crawling, trawling over night cast sands At their destination, what do they command These creatures that crawl, under moonless nights A scratching of grain, as they are hidden from sight What is their want, what is their gain To leave their deep, into anothers domain They scuttle in hoards, covering our lands Is this a chemistry, or cleverly planned These liitle cast creatures, of a different metal In technology evolution, is this their settle Time will tell, can we all live together Or are they here, for in humans they will sever Will we be here in a couple of years Or are these crawling creatures, The Langoliers http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/fantasy-6.php

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Date: 2/23/2010 8:19:00 PM
I like the detail that you put into your words, it really paints a picture for the reader, thanks for the congrats on my poem! best of luck to you as well!
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Date: 2/21/2010 6:45:00 AM
Interesting thoughts that you have penned here in this one. Questionings arise from the deep ....are these those crabs that come out at night especially a certain time of the year??? Or maybe sea turtles?? Keep the creative pen flowing. Your gift is growing. Sara
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Date: 2/21/2010 6:12:00 AM
Cool write... I read it again in my mind as narrated by Rod Serling from the old twilight Zone ! Good one James-Robert
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Date: 2/21/2010 1:57:00 AM
well written!
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Date: 2/20/2010 5:58:00 PM
Oooooh, James, frightening! The "The Langoliers"! Speaking about movies, I just saw "Braveheart", again, for I don't know how many times. Your Bonnie Scotland is so gorgeous!! Peace, Audrey
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