Caroline Cécile Delacroix Poet Choka

Upon My Shore

Rest upon My shore
Where you just washed out, worn out
From treacherous seas.

Close your eyes a while
Let your dream softly arise
In your heart and mind.

Do not feel adrift
For you have survived hardship
And have found My land.

This haven is yours
You need not fight anymore
What is Mine is yours.

Your love has found ground
And I knew that you would come
Inner peace be yours.

I've loved you so long
Your presence brings Me great joy
At last, I've found you.

By CarolineCécile
Copyright © 09.20.10

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 3, 2011 at 10:35 PM Congrats Caroline on having all three submissions of your poetry make it to first round competition in PS contest..good luck luv..

Debbie Guzzi August 2, 2011 at 6:14 PM My. my, my look at you shine! 3 verses moving on up! Light & Love

John Freeman August 2, 2011 at 9:10 AM Caroline, Congratulations on your poems' capture of the first round. Agape, Moses

Gert W. Knop March 16, 2011 at 4:57 AM Apprécié la lecture de votre beau poème aujourd'hui, Caroline! Have a great day and thank you for your ongoing kind comments! Take care und alles Gute!...Gert:)

Anthony Beesley October 31, 2010 at 5:33 PM lucky stars above are shining on me 2day...love it

Andrea Dietrich September 26, 2010 at 4:07 PM what a beautiful metaphor. this is quite nice, CAroline. LUv, Andrea

Wilma Neels September 24, 2010 at 1:15 PM Soothing and comforting write Caroline. There is definitely peace of mind at that shore. Beautiful write love Wilma

Diane Locksley September 24, 2010 at 6:02 AM It is when we are at our low points in life, that God makes his presence known and offers comfort, Caroline. You're a terrific writer with a creative style that I admire. Have a nice weekend, Diane

Carol Sunshine Brown September 23, 2010 at 10:23 AM It has been my pleasure to read your poetry today Caroline. Thank you for sharing your writing. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire September 22, 2010 at 4:02 PM I don't see how this could be misinterpreted... It seems so very clear to me. Love, Carolyn

Carolyn Devonshire September 22, 2010 at 3:22 PM What an inspiring write of faith, Caroline. When all else goes wrong in the world, I have to remind myself that God is always there for us, watching over us and offering comfort. Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta September 22, 2010 at 3:14 PM Very effective multiple chokas esxpressing love and its yearnings. Caroline

Michael J. Falotico September 22, 2010 at 1:58 PM I love this write, ever line has a such emotion..thanks for sharing...love Michael

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 22, 2010 at 12:44 PM Caroline this is a powerful intense and emotional piece ... very expressive from the depth of your inner being luv... enjoyed tremendously my friend..