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Upon My Shore

Rest upon My shore Where you just washed out, worn out From treacherous seas. Close your eyes a while Let your dream softly arise In your heart and mind. Do not feel adrift For you have survived hardship And have found My land. This haven is yours You need not fight anymore What is Mine is yours. Your love has found ground And I knew that you would come Inner peace be yours. I've loved you so long Your presence brings Me great joy At last, I've found you. By CarolineCécile Copyright © 09.20.10

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/3/2011 10:35:00 PM

Congrats Caroline on having all three submissions of your poetry make it to first round competition in PS contest..good luck luv..

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/2/2011 6:14:00 PM

My. my, my look at you shine! 3 verses moving on up! Light & Love

John Freeman

Date: 8/2/2011 9:10:00 AM

Caroline, Congratulations on your poems' capture of the first round. Agape, Moses

Gert W. Knop

Date: 3/16/2011 4:57:00 AM

Apprécié la lecture de votre beau poème aujourd'hui, Caroline! Have a great day and thank you for your ongoing kind comments! Take care und alles Gute!...Gert:)

Anthony Beesley

Date: 10/31/2010 5:33:00 PM

lucky stars above are shining on me 2day...love it

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/26/2010 4:07:00 PM

what a beautiful metaphor. this is quite nice, CAroline. LUv, Andrea

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/24/2010 1:15:00 PM

Soothing and comforting write Caroline. There is definitely peace of mind at that shore. Beautiful write love Wilma

Diane Locksley

Date: 9/24/2010 6:02:00 AM

It is when we are at our low points in life, that God makes his presence known and offers comfort, Caroline. You're a terrific writer with a creative style that I admire. Have a nice weekend, Diane

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/23/2010 10:23:00 AM

It has been my pleasure to read your poetry today Caroline. Thank you for sharing your writing. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/22/2010 4:02:00 PM

I don't see how this could be misinterpreted... It seems so very clear to me. Love, Carolyn

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/22/2010 3:22:00 PM

What an inspiring write of faith, Caroline. When all else goes wrong in the world, I have to remind myself that God is always there for us, watching over us and offering comfort. Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/22/2010 3:14:00 PM

Very effective multiple chokas esxpressing love and its yearnings. Caroline

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 9/22/2010 1:58:00 PM

I love this write, ever line has a such emotion..thanks for sharing...love Michael

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/22/2010 12:44:00 PM

Caroline this is a powerful intense and emotional piece ... very expressive from the depth of your inner being luv... enjoyed tremendously my friend..