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Upon Autumn's Stage

Upon autumn's stage where vermillion vistas and cobalt-blue sky meet
Picturesque hues enchant, oscillating in breeze, as scarlet landscapes greet.

Falling leaves trickle down on golden yellow fabric in shades of amber fire
As barren trees fight gusty winds to hold on to remnants of brown attire.

Chilled air empowers imperial red tinges to adorn vestiges of fading green
Transforming lakes and ponds into heavens of romantic crimson scene.

Harvests of freshly cut grains cheerfully celebrate season's festive meals,
Sipping cinnamon tea and sampling pumpkin pies, welcome autumn feels.

Revelers rejoice glimpses of winter under moonlit-glow of freezing nights
As naked forests sway in tandem, yearning for the rebirth of vibrant sights.

October 4, 2018
Placed 3rd: Seasonal verse poetry contest by Brian Strand
Placed 4th in Vermillion autumn couplets contest by Vermillion Scythe

Copyright © Vijay Pandit | Year Posted 2018

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Connie Marcum Wong Date: 7/1/2019 11:48:00 AM Congratulations on this heavenly poem placing third Vijay. It is a top winner for me as Autumn is my favorite season. A beautiful rendering my friend! : ) xxoo Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 11/14/2018 12:56:00 PM Congratulations, Vijay! Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 11/13/2018 3:10:00 AM dropping back with my congrats Vijay:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 11/13/2018 7:52:00 AM Thank you Jan.

Eve Roper Date: 11/12/2018 11:09:00 PM Awesome Imagery ,Vijay, congratulations on your win. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 11/13/2018 7:51:00 AM Thank you Eve.

Heidi Sands Date: 11/12/2018 4:42:00 PM Congratulations for your great win : ) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 11/12/2018 5:05:00 PM Thank you Heidi..appreciate your feedback, always.

Line Gauthier Date: 11/12/2018 4:11:00 PM Beautiful, Vijay. Congrats on your win. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 11/12/2018 5:04:00 PM Thank you Line--appreciate the visit and comments.

Brandy Nicole Date: 11/12/2018 4:05:00 PM I love this poem. I knew the moment I read it, that it would caress the sky, and softly stay there. :) Your words belong floating in the sapphire blue. Congratulations Vijay, on this win. ~ Brandy Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 11/12/2018 5:04:00 PM Thank you Brandy..truly appreciate your support and highly analytical..lovely feedback.

Wendy Watson Date: 11/12/2018 3:14:00 PM What incredibly detailed and beautifully composed couplets,Vijay. This was such an enjoyable perusal! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 11/12/2018 5:02:00 PM Thank you Wendy--appreciate the kind remarks.

Vermillion Scythe Date: 11/12/2018 2:25:00 PM You did great in my contest! Great job for your fourth place achievement! -VS Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 11/12/2018 5:02:00 PM Thank you Vermillion--appreciate the visit and comments.

Ronald A. Williams Date: 10/17/2018 10:43:00 AM Well versed and a well written poetic write my friend. Your imagery is fine and great as usual. Amen, Blessings. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 10/17/2018 11:18:00 AM Thank you Ronald.

Warren Doll Date: 10/12/2018 9:57:00 AM Vijay, brilliant capture of Autumn in your beautiful poem. An immediate fav for me ~Warren Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 10/12/2018 10:30:00 AM Thank you Warren.

Robert Lindley Date: 10/9/2018 8:12:00 AM Truly exquisite renderings of the magnificent beauty of Autumn and its exquisite colors my great friend! A fav and a bright gem... Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 10/11/2018 6:08:00 AM Thank you Robert--appreciate the visit and your generous feedback.

Vladislav Raven Date: 10/8/2018 5:08:00 PM Hi Vijay, your wonderful words express so vibrantly my favourite season....AUTUMN! You bring autumn to life before my eyes. I can step straight into your canvas of autumn and live the moment. This has to be a fave. Have a wonderful tuesday....Mike. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 10/8/2018 5:59:00 PM Many thanks for the visit, Mike. I appreciate your generous feedback.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/8/2018 1:11:00 PM - A beautiful painting of autumn, Vijay :) - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 10/8/2018 2:36:00 PM Thank you Anne-Lise.

M. L. Kiser Date: 10/8/2018 10:37:00 AM You've painted quite a colorful word painting about Autumn's enchanting beauty. Lovely; best of luck in the contest. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 10/8/2018 2:35:00 PM Thank you M.L.K.

Joanna Daniel Date: 10/8/2018 7:53:00 AM Excellent, Vijay! Should win the top spot:) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 10/8/2018 2:35:00 PM Thank you Jo.

Nette Onclaud Date: 10/7/2018 11:32:00 AM you weave a radiant fabric of autumn's mantle, vijay... greeat pen!..huggs Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 10/8/2018 6:11:00 AM Thank you, nette..appreciate the feedback.

Suzanne Delaney Date: 10/7/2018 5:28:00 AM Beautiful tapestry of Autumn, Vijay: This will be a real winner. It is for me. Hugs, SuZ Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 10/7/2018 6:44:00 AM Thank you SuZ..appreciate your comments.

Joseph May Date: 10/6/2018 5:48:00 PM Great depiction of the season Vijay..Best wishes Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 10/7/2018 6:44:00 AM Thank you Joseph.

Harry Horsman Date: 10/6/2018 3:08:00 PM Your gusty winds just blow me away Vijay, excellent poetry Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 10/6/2018 3:41:00 PM Thank you Harry.

Paul Callus Date: 10/6/2018 2:51:00 PM Your autumn stage is aflame with captivating colours, Vijay! Beautiful! Regards // paul Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 10/6/2018 3:41:00 PM Thank you Paul.

Alexis Y. Date: 10/6/2018 11:08:00 AM Hi Vijay, You've penned such a beautiful write for the contest theme. The content is amazing and the imagery is just breathtaking. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 10/6/2018 3:41:00 PM Thank you Alexis for your kind feedback.

Janice Canerdy Date: 10/6/2018 9:54:00 AM This is really beautiful, Vijay! Janice Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 10/6/2018 3:40:00 PM Thank you Janice.

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 10/6/2018 4:36:00 AM A picturesque view of autumn's splendor Vijay. Written with your golden pen! Lovely, just lovely! : ) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 10/6/2018 7:27:00 AM Appreciate the generous remarks--many many thanks, Connie.

Nette Onclaud Date: 10/5/2018 6:34:00 PM lovely portrayal of autumn so vividly quilled....enjoyed your word choices, vijay! huggs Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 10/6/2018 7:26:00 AM Thank you nette..appreciate the kind feedback.

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