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Upon Autumn's Stage

Upon autumn's stage where vermillion vistas and cobalt-blue sky meet Picturesque hues enchant, oscillating in breeze, as scarlet landscapes greet. Falling leaves trickle down on golden yellow fabric in shades of amber fire As barren trees fight gusty winds to hold on to remnants of brown attire. Chilled air empowers imperial red tinges to adorn vestiges of fading green Transforming lakes and ponds into heavens of romantic crimson scene. Harvests of freshly cut grains cheerfully celebrate season's festive meals, Sipping cinnamon tea and sampling pumpkin pies, welcome autumn feels. Revelers rejoice glimpses of winter under moonlit-glow of freezing nights As naked forests sway in tandem, yearning for the rebirth of vibrant sights. October 4, 2018 Placed 3rd: Seasonal verse poetry contest by Brian Strand Placed 4th in Vermillion autumn couplets contest by Vermillion Scythe

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/1/2019 11:48:00 AM

Congratulations on this heavenly poem placing third Vijay. It is a top winner for me as Autumn is my favorite season. A beautiful rendering my friend! : ) xxoo

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/14/2018 12:56:00 PM

Congratulations, Vijay!

Jan Allison

Date: 11/13/2018 3:10:00 AM

dropping back with my congrats Vijay:-) hugs jan xx

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/13/2018 7:52:00 AM

Thank you Jan.

Eve Roper

Date: 11/12/2018 11:09:00 PM

Awesome Imagery ,Vijay, congratulations on your win.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/13/2018 7:51:00 AM

Thank you Eve.

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/12/2018 4:42:00 PM

Congratulations for your great win : )

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/12/2018 5:05:00 PM

Thank you Heidi..appreciate your feedback, always.

Line Gauthier

Date: 11/12/2018 4:11:00 PM

Beautiful, Vijay. Congrats on your win.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/12/2018 5:04:00 PM

Thank you Line--appreciate the visit and comments.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 11/12/2018 4:05:00 PM

I love this poem. I knew the moment I read it, that it would caress the sky, and softly stay there. :) Your words belong floating in the sapphire blue. Congratulations Vijay, on this win. ~ Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/12/2018 5:04:00 PM

Thank you Brandy..truly appreciate your support and highly analytical..lovely feedback.

Wendy Watson

Date: 11/12/2018 3:14:00 PM

What incredibly detailed and beautifully composed couplets,Vijay. This was such an enjoyable perusal!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/12/2018 5:02:00 PM

Thank you Wendy--appreciate the kind remarks.

Vermillion Scythe

Date: 11/12/2018 2:25:00 PM

You did great in my contest! Great job for your fourth place achievement! -VS

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/12/2018 5:02:00 PM

Thank you Vermillion--appreciate the visit and comments.

Ronald A. Williams

Date: 10/17/2018 10:43:00 AM

Well versed and a well written poetic write my friend. Your imagery is fine and great as usual. Amen, Blessings.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/17/2018 11:18:00 AM

Thank you Ronald.

Warren Doll

Date: 10/12/2018 9:57:00 AM

Vijay, brilliant capture of Autumn in your beautiful poem. An immediate fav for me ~Warren

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/12/2018 10:30:00 AM

Thank you Warren.

Robert Lindley

Date: 10/9/2018 8:12:00 AM

Truly exquisite renderings of the magnificent beauty of Autumn and its exquisite colors my great friend! A fav and a bright gem...

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/11/2018 6:08:00 AM

Thank you Robert--appreciate the visit and your generous feedback.

Vladislav Raven

Date: 10/8/2018 5:08:00 PM

Hi Vijay, your wonderful words express so vibrantly my favourite season....AUTUMN! You bring autumn to life before my eyes. I can step straight into your canvas of autumn and live the moment. This has to be a fave. Have a wonderful tuesday....Mike.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/8/2018 5:59:00 PM

Many thanks for the visit, Mike. I appreciate your generous feedback.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/8/2018 1:11:00 PM

- A beautiful painting of autumn, Vijay :) - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/8/2018 2:36:00 PM

Thank you Anne-Lise.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 10/8/2018 10:37:00 AM

You've painted quite a colorful word painting about Autumn's enchanting beauty. Lovely; best of luck in the contest.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/8/2018 2:35:00 PM

Thank you M.L.K.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 10/8/2018 7:53:00 AM

Excellent, Vijay! Should win the top spot:)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/8/2018 2:35:00 PM

Thank you Jo.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/7/2018 11:32:00 AM

you weave a radiant fabric of autumn's mantle, vijay... greeat pen!..huggs

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/8/2018 6:11:00 AM

Thank you, nette..appreciate the feedback.

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 10/7/2018 5:28:00 AM

Beautiful tapestry of Autumn, Vijay: This will be a real winner. It is for me. Hugs, SuZ

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/7/2018 6:44:00 AM

Thank you SuZ..appreciate your comments.

Joseph May

Date: 10/6/2018 5:48:00 PM

Great depiction of the season Vijay..Best wishes

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/7/2018 6:44:00 AM

Thank you Joseph.

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/6/2018 3:08:00 PM

Your gusty winds just blow me away Vijay, excellent poetry

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/6/2018 3:41:00 PM

Thank you Harry.

Paul Callus

Date: 10/6/2018 2:51:00 PM

Your autumn stage is aflame with captivating colours, Vijay! Beautiful! Regards // paul

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/6/2018 3:41:00 PM

Thank you Paul.

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/6/2018 11:08:00 AM

Hi Vijay, You've penned such a beautiful write for the contest theme. The content is amazing and the imagery is just breathtaking. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/6/2018 3:41:00 PM

Thank you Alexis for your kind feedback.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 10/6/2018 9:54:00 AM

This is really beautiful, Vijay! Janice

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/6/2018 3:40:00 PM

Thank you Janice.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/6/2018 4:36:00 AM

A picturesque view of autumn's splendor Vijay. Written with your golden pen! Lovely, just lovely! : )

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/6/2018 7:27:00 AM

Appreciate the generous remarks--many many thanks, Connie.