Vijay Pandit Poet Couplet

Upon Autumn's Stage

Upon autumn's stage where vermillion vistas and cobalt-blue sky meet
Picturesque hues enchant, oscillating in breeze, as scarlet landscapes greet.

Falling leaves trickle down on golden yellow fabric in shades of amber fire
As barren trees fight gusty winds to hold on to remnants of brown attire.

Chilled air empowers imperial red tinges to adorn vestiges of fading green
Transforming lakes and ponds into heavens of romantic crimson scene.

Harvests of freshly cut grains cheerfully celebrate season's festive meals,
Sipping cinnamon tea and sampling pumpkin pies, welcome autumn feels.

Revelers rejoice glimpses of winter under moonlit-glow of freezing nights
As naked forests sway in tandem, yearning for the rebirth of vibrant sights.

October 4, 2018
Placed 3rd: Seasonal verse poetry contest by Brian Strand
Placed 4th in Vermillion autumn couplets contest by Vermillion Scythe

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Connie Marcum Wong July 1, 2019 at 11:48 AM Congratulations on this heavenly poem placing third Vijay. It is a top winner for me as Autumn is my favorite season. A beautiful rendering my friend! : ) xxoo

Kim Rodrigues November 14, 2018 at 12:56 PM Congratulations, Vijay!

Jan Allison November 13, 2018 at 3:10 AM dropping back with my congrats Vijay:-) hugs jan xx Vijay Pandit November 13, 2018 at 7:52 AM Thank you Jan.

Eve Roper November 12, 2018 at 11:09 PM Awesome Imagery ,Vijay, congratulations on your win. Vijay Pandit November 13, 2018 at 7:51 AM Thank you Eve.

Heidi Sands November 12, 2018 at 4:42 PM Congratulations for your great win : ) Vijay Pandit November 12, 2018 at 5:05 PM Thank you Heidi..appreciate your feedback, always.

Line Gauthier November 12, 2018 at 4:11 PM Beautiful, Vijay. Congrats on your win. Vijay Pandit November 12, 2018 at 5:04 PM Thank you Line--appreciate the visit and comments.

Brandy Nicole November 12, 2018 at 4:05 PM I love this poem. I knew the moment I read it, that it would caress the sky, and softly stay there. :) Your words belong floating in the sapphire blue. Congratulations Vijay, on this win. ~ Brandy Vijay Pandit November 12, 2018 at 5:04 PM Thank you Brandy..truly appreciate your support and highly analytical..lovely feedback.

Wendy Watson November 12, 2018 at 3:14 PM What incredibly detailed and beautifully composed couplets,Vijay. This was such an enjoyable perusal! Vijay Pandit November 12, 2018 at 5:02 PM Thank you Wendy--appreciate the kind remarks.

Vermillion Scythe November 12, 2018 at 2:25 PM You did great in my contest! Great job for your fourth place achievement! -VS Vijay Pandit November 12, 2018 at 5:02 PM Thank you Vermillion--appreciate the visit and comments.

Ronald A. Williams October 17, 2018 at 10:43 AM Well versed and a well written poetic write my friend. Your imagery is fine and great as usual. Amen, Blessings. Vijay Pandit October 17, 2018 at 11:18 AM Thank you Ronald.

Warren Doll October 12, 2018 at 9:57 AM Vijay, brilliant capture of Autumn in your beautiful poem. An immediate fav for me ~Warren Vijay Pandit October 12, 2018 at 10:30 AM Thank you Warren.

Robert Lindley October 9, 2018 at 8:12 AM Truly exquisite renderings of the magnificent beauty of Autumn and its exquisite colors my great friend! A fav and a bright gem... Vijay Pandit October 11, 2018 at 6:08 AM Thank you Robert--appreciate the visit and your generous feedback.

Vladislav Raven October 8, 2018 at 5:08 PM Hi Vijay, your wonderful words express so vibrantly my favourite season....AUTUMN! You bring autumn to life before my eyes. I can step straight into your canvas of autumn and live the moment. This has to be a fave. Have a wonderful tuesday....Mike. Vijay Pandit October 8, 2018 at 5:59 PM Many thanks for the visit, Mike. I appreciate your generous feedback.

Anne-Lise Andresen October 8, 2018 at 1:11 PM - A beautiful painting of autumn, Vijay :) - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Vijay Pandit October 8, 2018 at 2:36 PM Thank you Anne-Lise.

M. L. Kiser October 8, 2018 at 10:37 AM You've painted quite a colorful word painting about Autumn's enchanting beauty. Lovely; best of luck in the contest. Vijay Pandit October 8, 2018 at 2:35 PM Thank you M.L.K.

Joanna Daniel October 8, 2018 at 7:53 AM Excellent, Vijay! Should win the top spot:) Vijay Pandit October 8, 2018 at 2:35 PM Thank you Jo.

Nette Onclaud October 7, 2018 at 11:32 AM you weave a radiant fabric of autumn's mantle, vijay... greeat pen!..huggs Vijay Pandit October 8, 2018 at 6:11 AM Thank you, nette..appreciate the feedback.

Suzanne Delaney October 7, 2018 at 5:28 AM Beautiful tapestry of Autumn, Vijay: This will be a real winner. It is for me. Hugs, SuZ Vijay Pandit October 7, 2018 at 6:44 AM Thank you SuZ..appreciate your comments.

Joseph May October 6, 2018 at 5:48 PM Great depiction of the season Vijay..Best wishes Vijay Pandit October 7, 2018 at 6:44 AM Thank you Joseph.

Harry Horsman October 6, 2018 at 3:08 PM Your gusty winds just blow me away Vijay, excellent poetry Vijay Pandit October 6, 2018 at 3:41 PM Thank you Harry.

Paul Callus October 6, 2018 at 2:51 PM Your autumn stage is aflame with captivating colours, Vijay! Beautiful! Regards // paul Vijay Pandit October 6, 2018 at 3:41 PM Thank you Paul.

Alexis Y. October 6, 2018 at 11:08 AM Hi Vijay, You've penned such a beautiful write for the contest theme. The content is amazing and the imagery is just breathtaking. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis Vijay Pandit October 6, 2018 at 3:41 PM Thank you Alexis for your kind feedback.

Janice Canerdy October 6, 2018 at 9:54 AM This is really beautiful, Vijay! Janice Vijay Pandit October 6, 2018 at 3:40 PM Thank you Janice.

Connie Marcum Wong October 6, 2018 at 4:36 AM A picturesque view of autumn's splendor Vijay. Written with your golden pen! Lovely, just lovely! : ) Vijay Pandit October 6, 2018 at 7:27 AM Appreciate the generous remarks--many many thanks, Connie.

Nette Onclaud October 5, 2018 at 6:34 PM lovely portrayal of autumn so vividly quilled....enjoyed your word choices, vijay! huggs Vijay Pandit October 6, 2018 at 7:26 AM Thank you nette..appreciate the kind feedback.

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