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Inspired by Greg's poem pic

https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/aubade_1272880

Upon a Seashore

fragments
        spindrift,gleams
sensuous 
    lively,lovely,
many-hued 
gossamer....
momentary 
              phenomena
a sunburnt glow..

a stylised shape
           opulence
curved
   yet sevelte

soft sensuous 
long thighs

      rounded hips,twinned 

      draped
lines
       become
          curves

shapes, 
      in colour
an active pose
          in shimmering light
sensuality 
     in 
          silhouette
        back-lit
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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La France Avatar
August 12, 2021 at 7:40 AM
Brian, I like your poem and layout very much, it reminds me a lot of how eecummings often wrote (he is one of my fav's) well done ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Strand Avatar
August 12, 2021 at 8:45 AM
My open style (mentioned in todays blog),that I came to circa 2012.Stay creative Constance
Tor Avatar
August 3, 2020 at 6:51 PM
Tantalizing Piece Brian. Exceptional metaphors...
Strand Avatar
August 3, 2020 at 10:03 PM
Cheers Michael
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