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Inspired by Greg's poem pic

https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/aubade_1272880

fragments spindrift,gleams sensuous lively,lovely, many-hued gossamer.... momentary phenomena a sunburnt glow.. a stylised shape opulence curved yet sevelte soft sensuous long thighs rounded hips,twinned draped lines become curves shapes, in colour an active pose in shimmering light sensuality in silhouette back-lit

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Date: 8/12/2021 7:40:00 AM
Brian, I like your poem and layout very much, it reminds me a lot of how eecummings often wrote (he is one of my fav's) well done ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
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Brian Strand
Date: 8/12/2021 8:45:00 AM
My open style (mentioned in todays blog),that I came to circa 2012.Stay creative Constance
Date: 8/3/2020 6:51:00 PM
Tantalizing Piece Brian. Exceptional metaphors...
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Brian Strand
Date: 8/3/2020 10:03:00 PM
Cheers Michael

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