Upon a Seashore

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Inspired by Greg's poem pic

https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/aubade_1272880

fragments
        spindrift,gleams
sensuous 
    lively,lovely,
many-hued 
gossamer....
momentary 
              phenomena
a sunburnt glow..

a stylised shape
           opulence
curved
   yet sevelte

soft sensuous 
long thighs

      rounded hips,twinned 

      draped
lines
       become
          curves

shapes, 
      in colour
an active pose
          in shimmering light
sensuality 
     in 
          silhouette
        back-lit

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Constance La France

Date: 8/12/2021 7:40:00 AM

Brian, I like your poem and layout very much, it reminds me a lot of how eecummings often wrote (he is one of my fav's) well done ~ peace and tranquility _Constance

Brian Strand
Date: 8/12/2021 8:45:00 AM

My open style (mentioned in todays blog),that I came to circa 2012.Stay creative Constance

Michael Tor

Date: 8/3/2020 6:51:00 PM

Tantalizing Piece Brian. Exceptional metaphors...

Brian Strand
Date: 8/3/2020 10:03:00 PM

Cheers Michael