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Upon A Pool

Blue pool had brave man quite transfixed
whose thoughts might seem muddled and mixed
dare he risk sweet life 
with deep pain and strife  
or ponder awhile in betwixt

Copyright © Howard Kerr | Year Posted 2024

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Andrea Dietrich

July 2, 2025 at 12:16 AM

Belated congrats on this limerick, Howard. And thanks for your nice recent comments

July 2, 2025 at 1:15 AM

So kind of you Andrea to rate this. With regard to my recent comments on your works you are most welcome. They are well deserved Howard

May 3, 2025 at 2:45 PM

Well, I don't think it reads like something that one should muddle over. Congratulations on your winner. Sara K

August 19, 2024 at 6:26 AM

Interesting! Congratulations!xo

August 19, 2024 at 4:24 PM

This is pretty deep...I hope he does not risk it! Xo

August 18, 2024 at 11:28 AM

cleverly penned Howard, many congrats on your win, at least he didn't dive in at the deep end, hugs Jan xx

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