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Blue pool had brave man quite transfixed whose thoughts might seem muddled and mixed dare he risk sweet life with deep pain and strife or ponder awhile in betwixt

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Date: 7/2/2025 12:16:00 AM
Belated congrats on this limerick, Howard. And thanks for your nice recent comments
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Howard Kerr
Date: 7/2/2025 1:15:00 AM
So kind of you Andrea to rate this. With regard to my recent comments on your works you are most welcome. They are well deserved Howard
Date: 5/3/2025 2:45:00 PM
Well, I don't think it reads like something that one should muddle over. Congratulations on your winner. Sara K
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Date: 8/19/2024 6:26:00 AM
Interesting! Congratulations!xo
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Crystol Woods
Date: 8/19/2024 4:24:00 PM
This is pretty deep...I hope he does not risk it! Xo
Date: 8/18/2024 11:28:00 AM
cleverly penned Howard, many congrats on your win, at least he didn't dive in at the deep end, hugs Jan xx
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