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Upon a Bed of Moss

Wake my little wood nymph, so I can cradle you in my arms.
Your innocence enthralls me. I'm enamored by your charms.
On this carpeted floor, lush with forest moss and wildflowers,
I'm tempted to make love to you, here in this secluded bower.

Your skin of porcelain beauty would make jealous any maiden.
Riches found in you, more valuable than chests with gold laden.
Luring lips stained as if by the tasting of rosy mulberry wine,
I long to lay down beside you and intimately make you mine.

Sleep easy, my little virgin, until the time of your own choosing.
Your virtue safe with me for tonight although we're both losing.
What wonders await when I glimpse the passion in your eyes.
Tis then you'll know my love for you in a look of no feign disguise.

I'll carry you to your home and accept this tender moment of loss
until the day we shall return to lie together upon this bed of moss.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Rhumour Avatar
February 12, 2016 at 10:54 AM
Most charming, the content rather suits the sonnet form. :) Best wishes, Dave
Lane Avatar
February 12, 2016 at 11:08 AM
Thank you, Dave. Those are very nice comments.
Makama Avatar
January 14, 2016 at 10:50 AM
#7 truly underrates this magnificent piece.. Absolutely brilliant
Lane Avatar
January 14, 2016 at 10:56 AM
What sweet words to read when I'm feeling low. Thank you, Funom. You brought a smile to my lips.
Breidenthal Avatar
January 13, 2016 at 2:21 PM
Ah, so beautifully written, Lin. "Tis then you'll know my love for you in a look of no feign disguise."...love that line in particular...great one! Always, Laura
Lane Avatar
January 13, 2016 at 4:35 PM
Hi, Laura. Thanks for such nice compliments!
Sage Avatar
January 13, 2016 at 11:00 AM
such thrilling sonnet, excellent write Lin
Lane Avatar
January 13, 2016 at 4:35 PM
Thanks a whole bunch, sage.
Scars Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 8:37 PM
I love this Lin, so much imagery...*smiles*
Lane Avatar
January 13, 2016 at 5:50 AM
Thank you bunches, Luloo.
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