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Uplifting

“If you keep only healthy food in your cupboard and fridge, you will eat good food.” – Errick McAdams

“You need a steroid to fix your ills.
Now vaccination to ward off winter chills.
Take an antidepressant, to calm your woes.
Let’s try antibiotics and see how it goes.

A short run of oxycodone to ease any pain.
Eating salt and acidy food you must refrain.
We will give you antacids just in case,
And a full range of vitamins, food to replace.

Eat nothing with Gluten or carbohydrate.
We’ll give you a pill to lower your heart rate.
A bevy of sprays to help you breathe.
A mood stabilizer if you begin to seethe.

There’s nothing else before you run out of money.
Make sure you call if you begin to feel funny.
Your health will soon be at its highest peak.
Make an appointment to see me in a week.”

"How uplifting it feels to be given such care.
Knowing my specialist  has it all right there.
And silly me was considering healthy living. 
Fresh air, good food and exercise, such a misgiving !!"
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La France Avatar
April 7, 2024 at 3:28 PM
Speaks, congratulations on your win in my contest with this awesome poem, I like the quote too, hugs
Andresen Avatar
March 28, 2024 at 2:32 PM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest, S.V. :) - Have a lovely Easter :) - hugs
Volumes Avatar
April 4, 2024 at 7:51 PM
Thank you so much for your comment Anne-Lise.
Goldsmith Avatar
March 27, 2024 at 10:03 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Uplifting" is a powerful write with a great ending. Why were we healthier many years ago??? Enjoy your day/win..............
Volumes Avatar
March 28, 2024 at 3:34 AM
After having the kids, I went for decades never needing a doctor or medication. once the scale tipped to "OLD" it seems there's a new pill I need every few months. I sometimes wonder what would happen if I just stopped taking them ! Not sure I am game to try it. Thanks for your wise comment Paula. Best wishes to you . ... Wen
Fowler Avatar
March 26, 2024 at 9:26 AM
LOL my dear friend. I was in the midst of writing a similar poem, but you've said it all here. Cure us or kill us, whatever works. Uplifting - Ha! Congratulations on your win Wen! :)
Volumes Avatar
March 26, 2024 at 10:31 AM
Glad you like it dear Linda. Its kinda true, There is a pill for every occasion these days. Sneeze .. a pill for a cold. Smile you must be feeling light headed - a pill for dizziness. Scratch an itch - an antihistamine.. You name it they've got it for ya!!!
Narain Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 10:36 AM
Your poem reminds me of my health care team. Everytime I see them, they want to prescribe another mediciine. I respectfully decline them, taking chances. I hope one day we will live with least amount of pills.
Volumes Avatar
March 26, 2024 at 10:27 AM
Yes it reminds me of mine too Jay. For years I blindly went along with them, now I have learned to say no. Thanks for your supportive comment. Best wishes from Wen
Andresen Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 3:07 AM
- I think "Fresh air, good food and exercise" is the best choice ... great written for the contest, S.V. ... best wishes :) - hugs
Volumes Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 5:09 AM
Shhh Anne -Lise dont tell anyone.. (but I agree with you !!) ;) Thanks for the great comment my friend ..Every best wish ,, Wen
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