Up Three Straight Nights

A half-waking dream
Your face peeks through clouds; eyes shut
In suspended sleep
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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May 26, 2015 at 3:39 PM
Intense
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September 25, 2009 at 4:15 PM
Interesting perspective in this poem. I like the way lines one and three interact. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for your kind comment. Have a wonderful weekend. Karen
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September 21, 2009 at 4:35 PM
What a Lovely Moment Captured... Beautiful Dream. MoonBee
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September 21, 2009 at 6:31 AM
Beautiful poem.
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September 20, 2009 at 3:04 AM
Been there had those nights. Very expressive and descriptive. Keep writing. Sara
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