Up There In Paradise

He took my hand to the other end of paradise 
we told secrets to each other as we fastened  
our eyes to the spingle songs of yesterday;
When the poetry stars descended 
we began a kiss that never ended 
up there, in paradise....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Vaso Avatar
October 2, 2018 at 1:09 AM
That's is so beautiful and heartwarming! what an amazing poem!!!
Kiser Avatar
October 1, 2018 at 10:47 PM
That is a lovely romantic image. Well done.
Mcferran Avatar
October 1, 2018 at 8:17 PM
Lovely phrasing, well done! ;)
Onclaud Avatar
October 1, 2018 at 2:28 PM
what a poetic delight; you brought me to a magical place, pixie... huggs
Gauthier Avatar
October 1, 2018 at 9:42 AM
Lovely, Pixie.
Pandit Avatar
October 1, 2018 at 6:41 AM
WOW! This is so superbly articulated. Romantic in every way. Well written, Pixie.
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