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Up There In Paradise

He took my hand to the other end of paradise we told secrets to each other as we fastened our eyes to the spingle songs of yesterday; When the poetry stars descended we began a kiss that never ended up there, in paradise....

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Date: 10/2/2018 1:09:00 AM
That's is so beautiful and heartwarming! what an amazing poem!!!
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Date: 10/1/2018 10:47:00 PM
That is a lovely romantic image. Well done.
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Date: 10/1/2018 8:17:00 PM
Lovely phrasing, well done! ;)
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Date: 10/1/2018 2:28:00 PM
what a poetic delight; you brought me to a magical place, pixie... huggs
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Date: 10/1/2018 9:42:00 AM
Lovely, Pixie.
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Date: 10/1/2018 6:41:00 AM
WOW! This is so superbly articulated. Romantic in every way. Well written, Pixie.
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