up the creek

.

 I'm in the pickle mine
            Think

This morn mine palate
      In concert with
         Mine maws
      the empanadas
         hern dulce
Mine thank you waved
        She winked

         This noon
  Whilst enjoying the
    Spring's cool wet
         the naiad

         the naiad
            think
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Smith Avatar
August 4, 2024 at 12:28 PM
I like poems that challenge me to second-guess. to connect the dots and to expose a hidden gem. I will get there by the end of the day. You can be sure of that. Mr. clever clogs. Best regards David in NZ
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August 5, 2024 at 9:48 PM
ty ;)
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