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Limerick inspired by Gershon Wolf's 'Ponder this'

13th February 2024

There once was a man whose thoughts he would speak Each time the police were called to the freak Got himself arrested For what he suggested Last time he was sent off to Devil's Creek.

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Robert Gorelick

Date: 2/20/2024 12:56:00 PM

You have the right to remain silent. If you can't say anything nice then don't say anything at all--Bambi's mother. Point well taken, Belle! Robert

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 2/19/2024 11:01:00 AM

Hello Beryl, He should have stayed quiet. Hugs. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/20/2024 1:42:00 PM

Hello Beryl, We agree. You are welcome. Hugs. /Darlene/

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 2/19/2024 5:56:00 PM

So he should, thank you Darlene. Hugs in return, Beryl

Jan Allison

Date: 2/13/2024 12:39:00 PM

good one Beryl lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 2/13/2024 1:51:00 PM

Thank you Jan :-) hugs back Beryl xx

Silent One

Date: 2/13/2024 10:58:00 AM

Great limerick Beryl. It really flows well..

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 2/13/2024 11:02:00 AM

Thanks a lot Silent One, appreciated. Beryl

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 2/13/2024 10:52:00 AM

lol better zip it when we need to heh, love this, humorous piece :)

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 2/13/2024 11:01:00 AM

Zip up and shut up is best, or we may make someone upset. Thank you Vi. Beryl

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/13/2024 10:45:00 AM

There will always be people who deserve punishment. Loved your limerick.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 2/13/2024 10:55:00 AM

So there will, thank you Victor. Beryl