Up In the Willow

Up in the willow climbing I go,
With the sky above and the earth below;
Each branch a step up to the sky,
Each step taken where feathered wings fly.

Up in the willow I see all around,
And all I am seeing is leafy green ground;
With lily and primrose to tint the hill,
Saying good bye to winter’s chill.

Up in the willow I hear rippling streams,
Carrying waters of opaline dreams;
And the persistent call of a waterfall,
Echoes throughout a green willow hall.

Up in the willow I feel the wind,
Rocking, and shocking brown etched limb;
And trees with leaves licked with gold,
Float down to earth with stories untold.
                                                    
Up in the willow I see all ablaze,
Scarlet sumac painting fall's sunny days;
While looking over earth’s bright sunny scapes,
With fields of hay and purple vine grapes.

The wind is flying in its lonely quest,
From north to south and east to west;
Singing the lyrics of September’s song,
In lithe willow branches all day long.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 7/7/2012 11:17:00 AM
What a gift you have for creating unforgettable images and delectable phrases. There are too many to single out, so let me just revel in the beauty of this piece in its entirety, (although your third verse is exceptional, I must say...) :))
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Date: 4/29/2012 5:03:00 AM
A girl after my own heart ! *smiles* Oh how I loved to climb those trees dear poet....and still do with Noah ! How can I resist ! Great write Elizabeth ! Have a wonderful new week my friend....much love, james
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Date: 11/18/2011 11:51:00 AM
This one keeps me smiling, climbing the tree with you and checking it all out as i've done so many times in the past. One of my favorite things, best place in the world to contemplate and this poem loaded with the imagery of it all makes me want to float along with the feelings and sensory perceptions it brings back to me. Just wonderful, Elizabeth. Took a trip and never left the farm.....
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Date: 6/7/2011 12:18:00 PM
The wind is flying in it's lonely quest....that is top notch.....filled with beautiful imagery...TAH
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Date: 6/5/2011 2:52:00 PM
Nice...I enjoyed very much
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Date: 6/5/2011 2:37:00 PM
Excellent writing! A pleaure reading - Well Penned :)
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