UP IN SMOKE
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UP IN SMOKE*
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whispers on the rails,
a lone train fades into dusk—
memories depart,
echoes of laughter linger,
in the smoke, dreams drift away.
*Note: This poem was originally published at Writer Monk in July 2025. It is my original poem
Copyright © Sara Etgen-Baker | Year Posted 2025
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