Up and Away

UP   AND   AWAY

Grumbling rumbling ground falls silent
She feels for freedom with delight
And her wing flaps’ gentle movement
Lets her  scale  invisible height

Shining metal sheets  a-polish
Steeply sloping wings now fly
And massive silver flying fish
Great creature hauls up thru the sky

Rising to the clouds and sun
We hear her engines whine and strain
Hold our breath and urge her on
Thru the sea of mist and rain

Wispy white the clouds are rent
Engines sing their song now soft
Purring  as the tension’s spent   
In freedom’s sunlight here aloft
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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July 29, 2014 at 2:01 PM
Sidney, A nice winning Quatrain. I don't know the form, however --Well done... Always ~LINDA
Smith Avatar
July 28, 2014 at 7:15 AM
Congrats on a great win, dear Sidney.. I so enjoyed the ride.. I don't actually fly... Hugs.. Arlene
Mehta Avatar
July 28, 2014 at 1:17 AM
Amazing and wonderful write, Congrats. Sidney
Johnson Avatar
July 28, 2014 at 12:05 AM
And we who are along for the ride are knowing there is no way such a weighty thing can fly. well done and congratulations. Love, Joyce
Deschler Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 8:51 PM
I enjoyed the adventure in this poem as it took flight! Very nice work, Sidney! Congrats on your win!
Guzzi Avatar
July 2, 2013 at 3:45 PM
So glad to see you writing, yet couldn't think of a thing for this one. Congrad's on Your win. Light & Love
A  Avatar
July 1, 2013 at 10:26 PM
a sweet above the clouds poem........... SKAT
A   Avatar
June 25, 2013 at 9:47 PM
Sidney, CONGRATULATIONS! on your awesome win, in the "Above the Clouds" a contest by Drake Eszes. have yourself a nice one... xox~ LINDA
Johnson Avatar
June 25, 2013 at 8:36 PM
I like this one Sidney. Awesome to be flying above the clouds. congratulations. Love, Joyce
Tacito Avatar
June 25, 2013 at 2:39 PM
I quite enjoyed this writing, Sidney. You were very descriptive in your verbiage and the flow was quite good. Solid ending too. Thanks so much for submitting this to my contest!
Beck Avatar
July 28, 2014 at 3:20 AM
Thanks Drake for reading and liking my effort....best regards Syd
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May 4, 2013 at 7:58 AM
- A enjoyable poem to read!:) - Have a lovely weekend Sidney! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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