Up a Creek Without a Paddle

<                              once this girl had seen her own shadow
                                got scared begun to wag and waddle
                                crossed over center line
                                hit by semi's behind 
                                now shes up creek without a paddle 







Writen by Katherine Stella

Entry For Rick Parise's 
Shadows And Lines Contest
G.L. All
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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June 18, 2011 at 3:03 PM
" Poetry Assignment# Form: Dramatic Monologue Poetry ~~ Category: Sad, confused, Native American, and educational ~ Title: * Grand Canyon Smiles * "
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June 18, 2011 at 11:30 AM
Nice humor and wit with lovely take up on the theme, katherine
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June 18, 2011 at 8:54 AM
nice short to the point , impcat
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