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The pocketbook Thrown upon The car seat Hangs precariously Unzipped
First attempt at Gogyohka Haven't a clue if correct

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Joe Maverick
Date: 10/24/2012 3:11:00 PM
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This is the sort of a write; that gets you on the edge of your seat, a good one in my Book Sara..!
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The Situation
Date: 10/24/2012 11:15:00 AM
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Precariously unzipped! Sara!
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S.Jagathsimhan Nair
Date: 10/24/2012 7:13:00 AM
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Nice one really, like it !! Jag
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Cory Long
Date: 10/24/2012 7:02:00 AM
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very clever and nicely laid out.. have a great day cory
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Russell Sivey
Date: 10/23/2012 7:36:00 PM
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Just hope no robber sees this unzipped pocketbook! This is a wonderful write my friend! I twist of humor with it as well I see! I really enjoyed this delightful and pleasant piece, Great Work!!
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 10/23/2012 5:17:00 PM
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Don't know how many cards I've lost like that [wince] under the seat or mat they go..into the abyss of darkness never to be seen again! Light & Love
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Linda-Marie Sweetheart
Date: 10/23/2012 2:07:00 PM
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AN INTENSE VISUAL SARA ..ONE CAN SEE AS READING IF TO SMILE OR FRET OVER LOST CONTENTS .. GOOD IDEA ANS BEST WISHES LUV ..
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Linda-Marie Sweetheart
Date: 10/23/2012 2:06:00 PM
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AN INTENSE VISUAL SARA ..ONE CAN SEE AS READING IF TO SMILE OR FRET OVER LOST CONTENTS .. GOOD IDEA ANS BEST WISHES LUV ..
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/23/2012 1:42:00 PM
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I like it and hopefully it's the kind of lines she meant us to do!!
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Carol Sunshine Brown
Date: 10/23/2012 1:32:00 PM
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I enjoyed reading your poetry today Sara. I need to try this form. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol
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