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Unzipped

The pocketbook
Thrown upon
The car seat
Hangs precariously
Unzipped  


First attempt at 
Gogyohka
Haven't a clue if correct

funnylifetanka

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Joe Maverick

October 24, 2012 at 3:11 PM

This is the sort of a write; that gets you on the edge of your seat, a good one in my Book Sara..!

The Situation

October 24, 2012 at 11:15 AM

Precariously unzipped! Sara!

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

October 24, 2012 at 7:13 AM

Nice one really, like it !! Jag

Cory Long

October 24, 2012 at 7:02 AM

very clever and nicely laid out.. have a great day cory

Russell Sivey

October 23, 2012 at 7:36 PM

Just hope no robber sees this unzipped pocketbook! This is a wonderful write my friend! I twist of humor with it as well I see! I really enjoyed this delightful and pleasant piece, Great Work!!