Unwinding Soul

Caged soul, what makes you sob.
One fine day you’re free or forever barred.
Wonder why you shed tears; 
I have surplus BLISS for all & you; should you ask.
What urges you survive - In awe I am, you subsist or have died.
Unwind yourself, my waif-like soul. Let me seize you there from here.
Unwind yourself for me if you tin. 
I am the PARADISE every human should be in.
Hold my hand, you’re free to dream. 
Of the shimmering sky that forever gleam, 
The unsullied air you could evermore breathe, 
Of the mountains you could perpetually reach, 
Of the lover with who you could eternally be, 
Of the valley at length that takes you to THEE.
Wonder who am I, my elfin soul?  I am lone a figment of you UNTIED.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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April 27, 2015 at 3:21 PM
roy g,, soulful #nice thought for once i was just reading and imagining life in every word. loved reading this---@@ Unwind yourself for me if you tin. I am the PARADISE every human should be in. Hold my hand, you’re free to dream. Of the shimmering sky that forever gleam of the montains...of the lover KEP ME POSTED IN YOUR POEMS and if you get some idle time,,read few of mine hope you ''ll like them #welcum to soup..wishing you great ahead
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April 26, 2015 at 10:27 PM
Arpita, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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April 26, 2015 at 2:39 PM
WOW, I just commented this poem, and already a featured poem:) Arpita, Dropped by to say hi and congratulate you on having your poem selected by Soup's Administration. This is a wonderful poem to have featured on the homepage. ~Always & Forever~ LINDA
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April 26, 2015 at 2:20 PM
Arpita, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@
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